I think I will drop the novel at this point. In case you would like feedback on why, there are two main points: First, the whole outer god trying to get in by introducing technology was too silly for me, but it wasn't that relevant for now so I continued. But I can't disregard this perfect grimdark Gary Stu MC surrounded by retar.ds, every woman wants to fuck him, every guy wants to get cucked by him. His father is one of the most powerful, MC blatantly cucks him but it is alright because he just happens to be into that shit. MC cucks his most important subordinate but it is alright because he happened to drink magic water that made him not give a shit. And the MC doesn't even know that beforehand and willingly risks himself getting fucked over in the process. That's my point of view, though I doubt anyone cares which is fair. Thanks for the entertainment until now and good luck from here on out.
love it
kingdom reference?
I see, even though Magic was derived from Demonic Power, the way they're applied in practice are polar opposites. Magic is a calculated art and Demonic Power is a matter of intuition and feeling. Sort of like the difference between instinctual-type and calculative-type Generals hundreds of years ago.
Anime & Comics · Accel14
whats a malebranch?
He had defeated a fragment of a Malebranche during the Civil War, where did this puny Ancestor get off thinking she could try to coerce his brother into doing anything?
Anime & Comics · Accel14
The comments man, flaming him as if most of them aren't lazy shits themselves
It was no wonder his taijutsu still sucked. He hated physical training. Loathed it with his very being and eagerly cheated at it with his fuinjutsu.
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
Eyes, there is only so much inhumanity the population would realistically tolerate, even if he rules with might and fear. Are the features retractable?
Author Note: I hope you liked the chapter. We're getting some actions again and some really important growth. Question: which of the four options would you've chosen in Viserys' shoes?
TV · Master4thWall
Hey man, love your work. Any info on your foreseeable upload schedule/availability? I hope life just got busy and nothing serious happened.
the second largest living Rat?
Despite his great size, I was still the second largest rat only being beaten out by a few inches. Our fight would be brutal on both of us and my horde was now larger and more well organised. A fight would be unlikely to go his way.
Fantasy · blobblob
Can't use too much of your brain with junkfood stories like these, or else you wont be able to enjoy
They hadn't started fighting yet, which meant he hadn't missed out on any of the valuable energy drops!
Anime & Comics · PhantomPen
what was a chal? I believe the name was mentioned previously?
"That's a chal!" the mage uttered, filled with stunned disbelief.
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ