Gg its been a year
Personally I like the rain, it makes me feel like i am not crying alone
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Eastern · Stubborn Little Fat Rabbit
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Fantasy · vinayraj
The author do be having some troubles on his first time 😏
"Son, there's no need to be ashamed, it's natural to fail the first time, you're not the only one experiencing that, many men in this world fail to penetrate the first time."
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
In the 3rd last Paragraph its writen “what says the time” it should be “what is the time?”
sad
The story plot so far is actually quite interesting but the gammar and the writing skills of the author is not very good as most of the sentences are run off lines and do not match with the next making it quite hard to read if the author improves on his writing the novel will be way better.
U can either use free pass or coins 1 free pass is one chapter for coins it depends on the length of the chapter
Could have been a much more exciting 😭
Cosmic Professional Gladiator
Sci-fi · I Eat Tomatoes