Drayven

10h

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they are on the moon the inhumans have neen monitoring earth

The screen showed two individuals riding one of those hoverboards she had seen on the shows frequently watched by Crystal. One of them was Ed and the other woman was an unidentified variable.

Technomancer in MCU

Movies · IdleMuse0307

Drayven

12h

Commented

Project T.A.H.I.T.I. will succeed, I will make it so.

i cant remember what the word is but there is a scientific word to the urge to wield a sword cant find any info online as all i ger is definitions for the word wield or swordsmanship but there is a word for the desire to tassy a long weapon that isn't a gun something about caveman instincts that says "unga bunga big stick"

Of course, that didn't mean Peter would slack off on his force training, as that was a very close second place for him. There was just something so primal and bada*s about wielding a sword that he felt deep in his bones.

I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Drayven

2d

Posted

this book seemed interesting so i gave it a read and it started out ok but progressively got worse and very confusing the writing quality dropped like a brick using the same descriptors repeatedly inconsistent point of view complete loss of continuity and attempting to explain fictional science but used non fictional materials honestly i spent the last few chapters just mentally fixing grammar but even then it was just nonsense as for the story it starts with modern family then moves into Wednesday and devolves into supernatural nonsense with transformers and then Egyptian gods show up and by then i was nearly done with the book have no idea how it ended but i doubt that the author could finish the book in a satisfying way his family despite being described as extremely caring seemed to completely forget about him he starts dating Wednesday only to disappear from her life to fight immortal monsters this book had so much potential but honestly failed to do anything with it. it's a mix of random nonsense plot holes dropped plot lines save yourself the headache and avoid this story if I Had to give the author advice is say you need to drastically improve your understanding of the english language stop putting so many plot elements into your storys the immortal supernatural beings were completely understand necessary and should never have been included don't bother explaining fictional science and keep it simple and work with someone that has a better understanding of writing to proof read your work and keep you on track and build on what you all ready made stop adding new things into the mix

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

a fist moving in seconds is pretty slow probably means milliseconds

His eyes widened but before he could move he saw the fist move reaching closer to his face by the seconds.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

where'd his armour go

My feet hit the ground as I felt the air rushing past my body.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

sometimes the writing is great and smooth then it just dropped and becomes nonsense there's no need to explain made up science if you yourself have no idea how it works his system told him that the particles were isolated to his hand and couldn't be used with his armour now out of nowhere he's giving buffs to the autobots and dude really needs to fix his rep with the autobots Optimus is literally the captain America of Cybertron he'd help the mc if he told him he's working to help defend earth

ch 163 Chapter 160 A Powerup

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

why is this important and how does James know this?

Its Arm had been ripped of, The last time it had experienced such injuries in a battle was against The Great Ice Dragon.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

Seeing that I felt my adrenaline pumping through my veins as I shifted my angel gripping the Energy saber tightly.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

it's meant to be xlii for 42 not xii which is 12

The four Mark armors, namely the Mark XL "Shotgun," Mark XXXV "Red Snapper," the Heartbreaker, and of course the Mark XII, were all being edited to fit James's enhanced body.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

how does he have the extremis virus if he never purchased Tony's knowledge from iron man 3

The Other Project that he will be focusing on also involved putting the final touches on the Serum that he plans on injecting before tommorows Mission.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

thag was about it ?

If one were to look closer into the that specific window on would see a simple Double Bed and a Night stand, Thag was about it.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

It would be attached to my hands, and a sword hilt would sort of pop out of a chamber in my arm.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

suit not pair he's only making one

He felt like the only way for him to quickly improve would only be to finish the SSS Serum or... Build a New pair of Armour by Himself.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

how did they get in his car

The City Mayor and Mrs. Thornhill promptly got out of the car, but Principal Weems had her head in her hands with a tired look.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

sentinel prime

"Worst of all, I saw you bleeding profusely, battling multiple giant machines. Some were on the ground, some were helping you. You were surrounded as you fought, explosions going all around you, and especially a giant Red robotic monster with purple eyes slashing towards your head with a massive sword from behind you."

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

With practiced ease, I quickly got to work and I began to loaf the boxes and remove the parachutes.

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TV · Karate_master_b

Drayven

2d

Commented

technically the armour should be extremely comfortable as he could use the in built motors to suspend him in a comfortable position if it's a case of the armour not having any padding thats his fault

"Right.." he said as he put his palms on his face in annoyance "I fell asleep..." he said before slowly standing up and looking at his body, James let out a groan as he rubbed his tired eyes, remembering that he had fallen asleep in his Armour.