benibomb

1 years ago

Commented

no intention

It was because, the moment he entered the realm he encountered an illusionary old man! At first, he freaked out when he saw the old man but after sensing that the other party had to intention to harm him he calmed down.

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Commented

*owe

'I don't know if you will return alive or not but remember you own me one.'

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Replied to Silakai

another way to explain it is that wasn't is just short for was not so here it is literally written as was not not

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Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Replied to DarkSpaceMan

i have a feeling he is going to increase the fl's talent, like through sharing some of his fluids, be it saliva, blood or smth

"Yue, can you hear the murmurs? They are saying it's a silver hair handsome boy. Remember you told me your preference..."

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Commented

*big elven families

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Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Commented

I'll just throw Miyuki in to the hat.

*Author Note; I am gonna introduce the fl soon~ Does anyone wanna suggest a name?

Celestial Bloodline

Fantasy · _Orange_

benibomb

1 years ago

Replied to _Orange_

Its's fine to not write it all out because it doesn't add a lot of value but leaving just fireball in makes you question things. either leaving the whole statpage out, or just naming the skills/ranks with no explanations are better ways of doing it.