GunnySniper

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GunnySniper
GunnySniper
11 months ago
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This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me! Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!

GunnySniper
GunnySniper
1 years ago
Posted

Paragon is the best character. For those who like hero stories, this is the story for you. I have read this on Webnovel as well, and like it there, and here. I really like it. It's goofy and fun and I can't wait to see more. Still super early on so my review will probably change as it goes on and gets bigger. For now I like it though. I want more fire force powers so hope we get more from Hope. A very well developed world, several mysteries that are revealed over time, points of view from various characters. There is so much information that I could spend hours writing the review, I recommend giving it a chance, it's really worth the experience. A good story I think.

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GunnySniper
GunnySniper
4 years ago
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Pretty good so far

GunnySniper
GunnySniper
4 years ago
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Meh... It's a story. There... That's what it is. It's not bad but it sure ain't good. Things happen lots of anime clique and rip offs. And by all accounts it is a good story but it just is held back by itself. Bad and good. Meh...

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GunnySniper
4 years ago
Replied to RainyLiquid2020

I like it sort of :/

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4 years ago
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I like it sort of :/

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4 years ago
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I like it sort of :/

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4 years ago
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I like it sort of :/

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4 years ago
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I like it sort of :/

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4 years ago
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I like it sort of :/

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Fantasy · RainyLiquid2020

  • Hero Hunter original

    Hero Hunter

    Fantasy

    The World of Zilon wasn't like the other five worlds that existed in there solar system. The people of this world all had strange abilities. It was like something out of a comic book. But the concept of Heroes didn't exist. Or at least the government didn't want them to see it. Power was everything and anyone who disagreed was wrong. Those who protect the weak were the villains. This is the story of Dawson Blight as he becomes an Enforcer. A group of Hero Hunters who's job is to deal with all super powered crime.

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