Pasithea_Midnight

Pasithea_Midnight

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I was seduced by the sun and found myself among stars. So, look to the sky and you'll find me, shining the brightest.

2019-03-02 Joined United States
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Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
1 months ago
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I'm not the type to normally type up reviews, but in my attempt to change that and filter out the garbage reviews on this site, I'll start with this story. Day one of me reading this, I looked at it through the lens of suspicion there aren't any good gamer fics and I'll say that like a fact, and if there are some, there aren't many on this sight or they have been dropped. I don't like gamer fics, they like to form a repetitive and rudimentary format of their characters constantly grinding and when they do attempt to incorporate the wider story of the world, it is so barebones and lackluster that I feel the need to blow my brains out. This is something I can't say is a problem with this story, the gamer parts have their moments, I can't say I care for them but as the integration with the wider world it is great, the characters feel real and the world lived in, all in all, the characters are likable and I see a sense of reasoning in some of their thoughts, I also quite like the aspect of the romance, the relation between Tigra, Catra, and Adora is splendid and well-formed. (This is not a harem story, it is a Polyamory. Two entirely different things as I am the biggest harem hater in the world.) The quality of the writing is great for this site, the sentences are written well, few grammar issues if any, dialogue is superb and realistic in a sense, I don't feel like it would be weird for anything said by the characters within this story to be said in real life(aside from the obvious fantastical elements and whatnot.) The writing is good, nuff said, as a fellow writer I was quite happy and surprised to find this story. The development of the story flows alongside the world background, as the story moves, more and more of the history of the world, as well as the main character, is revealed. It is done in such a fashion that it feels smooth and natural. Well done! I'll end my review with my recommendation for it as I couldn't recommend it enough! You've done a splendid job author! I as one know how hard it can be to come up with ideas plans and the like when writing - whether that be from lack of time, author's block, or simply having so many thoughts and ideas that it's nearly impossible to put a lid on some of them. Your work and ability so far is commendable. I can't say this is the best review, but I tried my best to write out my thoughts to the best of my ability.

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
1 months ago
Commented

I don't like the idea of him having a devil fruit, one he'll lose the ability to swim which sucks, but he already has mastered haki, he can literally deal with anyone. Have him be like Gold Roger, Rayleigh and Garp, some of the strongest without a devil fruit.

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
8 months ago
Replied to Vedora_Tempest

But she doesn't know that.

"It's fine Yuta, I can see Rika is a bit out of your control at the moment, you're lucky I excel at controlling things. Any other sorcerer would've exercised it out of necessity. Do try your best to keep her under control." she voiced, letting her order subtly take root inside his mind.

The Almighty Control Sorcerer

The Almighty Control Sorcerer

Anime & Comics · BossCampers

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Replied to sami_funges

The DC live-action movies are such disappointments I'd never use them for any form of information. I prefer the animated or the comics, they at least do those right half the time.

After a long bout of silence, she let out a heavy breath, with sluggish movements, she moved toward the back of the mass graveyard, where there were dozens of large stones embedded within the ground; these were the graves of all the Dragons lost in the war with the Amazonians.

[DC] Watch The Fire!

[DC] Watch The Fire!

Anime & Comics · Pasithea_Midnight

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Commented

+1

No more love interests, just Hope

Unique Gamers Travels

Unique Gamers Travels

TV · ArtoriaPendragon_

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Commented

Delivered as promised! Thanks for the chapter! I kinda expected him to bring Spiderman when he described the melody as a spider web in the last chapter.

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapters!

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Congrats on a hundo chapters!

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Replied to _Avatar0FFury_

Of course. And definitely, InhHyuk Lee is the goat!

Pasithea_Midnight
Pasithea_Midnight
9 months ago
Replied to ScarletQC

What about now? Can you see the others as well?

Dragon Maiden I.e. Suyeong Willhouse Solstratos [MC] :

[DC] Watch The Fire!

[DC] Watch The Fire!

Anime & Comics · Pasithea_Midnight

  • Blue Paint original

    Blue Paint

    Sci-fi REINCARNATION COMEDY MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY

    "Hey, want to be reincarnated?" It all started with that simple question, sure it wasn't said exactly in that way or context but it's all the same, the events remained the same... and so did its effects, its effects on both her story and on herself. Mysterious beings sending people across the many worlds through a cafe and their strange sense of doing things have brought her into an experience that she would either regret experiencing or look back on as necessary suffering. An alien planet of human-looking people who display power and skills of unique origin. With blasters, air rifles, railguns, flying ships, flying cars, spaceships, teleporters, and enormous rings, she woke to find herself in a world that was foreign to her with all forms of objects that she could only dream of. They continuously went against what she thought to be humanly possible, though I guess that is no longer a valid thought to have, they however have predetermined thoughts about her. The people there despised her existence, they wished for her pain, her suffering, her death... Throughout many years of pain and suffering, she still found a way to come out on top, she found a way to prove her existence ignoring all that was done to her and said about her. Like a bolt of lightning, she came quickly, she came loudly, and she left her presence in the hearts and minds of the people she encountered, for that was what she desired, for however much they wanted her erasure and disappearance she wanted them to be reminded of her presence even more. Blue Paint. Her hair and eyes cultivate the paint that is splattered across the canvas that is her, and the pain she amasses shall be the brush she uses to plaster said paint. At the end of the journey even with the many things, she shall experience on the way her mind will always go back to when she was asked that very simple question. "Hey, do you want to be reincarnated?" *** Extra Tags – Gender-bender, Action, Adventure, War, etc. Chapter length - 1500 - 2700 One chapter a week. (No promises) COVER IS NOT MINE, I am not the cover's rightful owner. If the original artist wants it taken down then please contact me! Discord: https://discord.gg/cBKysw4VFx

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  • [DC] Watch The Fire! original

    [DC] Watch The Fire!

    Anime & Comics ACTION R18 MAGIC DARK SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN DRAGON MYTH YURI DC

    It was a simple day, the people sauntering about their mundane, that is until it shifted to fire and brimstone. Collapsed upon her knees, a young Suyeong watched as the world around her collapsed. The sky was painted in blood, screams filled the air as the world crumbled and shrieked. Fire spiraled into the sky, smoke billowing after it. This was all a forthcoming event, and it was orchestrated by one individual, a spiteful man, a man who took the life of her dearest friend, a man she would hunt for the better half of her life. The hunt after the man had led her to this moment, ascended into the sky, a dragon that dwarfed all present slithering in the skies behind her while her golden eyes glared down on the collective heroes of justice, the Man of Steel, Wonder Woman, and the Caped Crusader stood tall at the forefront, staring her down. Her eyes shook in confusion, but she still roared lightning wrapping around her, "You've decided to stand in my way, so I will do what I must."

    8 Chs 250 Collections

  • The Villainess' Knight original

    The Villainess' Knight

    Fantasy COMEDY MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN NONHUMAN POSSESSIVE HISTORICAL

    Oxyelle was your average Joe, excluding her talent in art and strange name. She was an incredibly average person in every other aspect. She worked as an artist. More specifically an artist for novels, drawing for many different novels being adapted. One particular Novel "A Rose For The Fire," was a novel written by two of her closest friends, so with her drawing it as well, it was obvious it was her favorite Novel to have drawn. Yet even if it was her favorite Novel, that didn't mean she wanted to wake up in it! And why do I still have the same name and looks? Due to having worked on many Novels that shared the same concept, she naturally came to a quick conclusion. "I most likely won't ever be able to return." With this, she decided to just live out her life as a commoner that is until she remembered something important. "I can save my favorite character... I can save the Villainess! Forget the plot, who cares about that, I can save the most beautiful woman in this entire world. Forget the heroine, she's a piece of trash anyway: "Why flirt with a man that has a freaking fiance?" "Yes! I'll do just that." Way of the sword? Way of the maid? Way of the artist? I'll do all of them! _________ Made this months ago, and it was just sitting in the vault — This is a combination of two of my story ideas. Also, I won't be focusing on this. No guaranteed update rate. _________ The cover photo is not mine, credits to the artist.

    4 Chs 9 Collections

  • Anax original

    Anax

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION COMEDY MAGIC NONHUMAN MYTH

    He was tired, locked up since young, the reason, petty hate, they hated the people he helped so much they threw a child in a cell. Finally, the moment he's been waiting for, execution day. Denying an offer to be helped, he allows himself to be executed, not without leaving a few kind words of course. After death, he finds himself alone surrounded by darkness, left only to his thoughts. Meeting a god, he learns he will be going through reincarnation, he denies this proposition as well, but it seems there is no choice in the matter. __________ Yeah, a new writer here, so, forgive me for my lack of skill. . The overarching arc only truly starts after the reincarnation, but everything that happens will be relevant.

    6 Chs 42 Collections