LordDylz

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Life's greatest illusion is Innocence.

I gave a half-look, "No one is," before taking off to keep the heat off Thor's back… or not. Seems like he's more capable than I thought. 

The Vision

The Vision

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1 years ago
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I'm using Yen not Valis as shown in the show. It just makes the conversion easier as I can just google values.

"Alright." Corwyn hefted a heavy pouch of Valis. It was his pay for the day today, a good 45 thousand Valis (~350 USD, 12 hours of work, 28 USD per hour. Average Welder makes around 18-35 USD an hour).

Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi]

Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi]

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1 years ago
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Jman is in my opinion one of if not the best author on this site. His stories aren't for everyone, and I shy away from them at times when I'm in the mood for a more wholesome and not 'r-pe, pillage, conquer' vibe. I'm giving this a good review of 4.8 stars. Jman's writing quality is good. His updates are always consistent and I can rest assured that if I look away for a few weeks to a month or two, I can expect a decent load of chapters for me to bing. His story often develops in predictable and often tiresome paths, reminding me of Chinese Xiaoxia novels. If in Xiaoxia novels its 'third realm ping-pong jumps to first realm ding-dong, then first realm ding-dong to third realm ching-chong', Jman's stories are 'I got this p-ssy, but then got another better p-ssy. Also, look at this new gun. Also, look at this new p-ssy. Also, look at this new body that I designed in my lab.' Like I said, 'r-pe, pillage, conquer' is a Jman brand, and it can get annoying at times when wholesome interactions are desired, rather than the 'p-ssy-slayer 9000' modus operandi that his MCs often hold. This doesn't exactly detract from his story development score, as you don't order pizza when you don't feel like ordering pizza. In this case, I don't read Jman when I don't want to read Jman stories. Now, for this story inparticular, I've taken off a star in Character Design. This is where my personal bias comes in and I just flat out admit to not liking Mormont, nor the often repetitive 'bulking behemoth at age 13' view slotted into this story. I face faulted when I read that a child was already taller than most men, especially men in Westeros who should be around 5' 5'' at the tallest for small-folk and six foot at the largest for 'well-fed' nobles. Sure, he's a northerner, but it just rubs me the wrong way that he just 'obtained' his body without any actual visible trials seen my the readers and one not possible by preview of the genetic lottery. There was some asinine explanation of hormones doing it, but it just drags on a man's psyche. For world building, its GOT or ASOIF, so I can't give a lower review than 5. Anyway, 4.8 stars, cool novel, I was hoping for the Overlord novel tho'.

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1 years ago
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Technically a fan of the Ink Spots, but same difference I guess as JT used those lyrics in their rap. Not that I'm not a JT fan, but the inspiration was from the OG.

His shoulders were covered by a pair of combat armor pauldrons, while his right arm was covered in a similar bracer while the left covered by a Pip-Boy. A gorget protected his neck with the numbers 666 emblazoned in red lettering on the green paint. On the side of his green helm was a faded red cross, along with the words 'I Don't Want To Set The World On Fire' in white before being underlined by 'Just Want To Start A Flame In Your Heart' in a poppy neon green outlined by red; plasma green and laser red.

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

Video Games · LordDylz

LordDylz
LordDylz
1 years ago
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Writing Quality: I'd say I'm a good writer, so I'll give myself five stars. :) Stability of Updates: Uhhhh.... I'd say one, but that really hurts my ratings, so I'll put it to a three as I often write around 10k words in a single sitting and start posting all of that in a single night before going dark for several weeks to a month. Story Development: I have...an idea. The goal is RWBY, the plan is simple; there is no plan. Four-ish stars. Character Design: Ivan's a cool dude to develop with his 'history' I invent at the slightest whim. I feel like I can do the stern military thing with Ult and Alt's gonna be the loose cannon murder machine (maybe like Revy from black lagoon? Eh, WIP.). 5 stars due to the cool art I post in the paragraph comments. World Background: Fallout's really cool, I feel like I'm doing something cool with being in New York, and while I won't be doing a deep dive into the Patriots like we can do with the Brother Hood of Steel in-game, they're more the baddies we'll be battling in the future. Remnant in the future is gonna be interesting to say the least and might be where this fic burns and dies like the ashes of the Old World though.

LordDylz
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1 years ago
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Cough, Cough, I'ma just 'borrow' all this, okay JMan?

Ult's body hadn't been seeing much work due to him using a majority of rare components and materials creating Alt's frame and structure, from the gold-platinum alloy bones, to the synthetic muscles that were made of a shape-memory alloy he'd used a massive amount of resources to both invent and manufacture for the slowly shaping up musculature for both of their bodies. Then there was a nearby bench with what looked to be a skin suit, of which was actually a Heavy-Real skin, a synthetic skin that could outright shrug off low calibers while actually enhancing certain tactile sensations without being deliberating.

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

Video Games · LordDylz

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'How my Charisma Score is 7 when I'm ugly as sin and such a social recluse, I'll never know.' Although, for most Ghouls a 7 would be human's...4? So maybe that was accurate. Besides, his body wasn't that bad, if one ignored the charcoal black skin that'd been melted and the glowing blue cracks and crags in his skin.

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

Video Games · LordDylz

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1 years ago
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I was looking up how many intelligent glowing ones there are, and found that two cannon ones in the games, Jason Bright and that Oswald guy up in Nuka-World. Other games also had them, but they were more knock off fallout games, so I'm not really sure if I should count them. Still, Int Focused Glowing Ones = Very Rare.

"I know there's more like me out there, but out of the billions of people that died in the Great War, our population must be in the not point zero zero zero zero something. Those that are still sapient likely don't have the same mutations that allow their minds to be as intact as my own, as all Ghouls have differing mutations." The man sighed, although it sounded like something dying.

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

Video Games · LordDylz

  • Eldritch Dealings [Multicross] original

    Eldritch Dealings [Multicross]

    Anime & Comics OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE VILLAIN ANTIHERO ACADEMY HARRYPOTTER WIZARDS

    4.95

    Would you sell your World, your Species, and your very Universe for a chance at a better life? If there was a red-button in front of you, and you could achieve everything you ever wanted by pressing it, all at the low-low cost of the annihilation of everything you've ever known; would you press that button? Approached by an unfathomable entity, a young man with nothing left to lose, little to gain, obtains the capital to sell his entire universe. One might think it luck, others might think it destiny; The Wyrm thinks everything is food, at the end of the strange aeons. A universe is sold as a meal, and in return a man gains power, freedom, and knowledge. It was the opportunity of a life-time, and despite his horrendous action, the man himself is not an Evil man. Simply...mortal. So very mortal. And so, adrift in the Multiverse, a newly Sparked Planeswalker embarks with his Patron's power lurking within his shadow.

    21 Chs 1.3k Collections

  • A Wizard In The Dungeon City [Danmachi] original

    A Wizard In The Dungeon City [Danmachi]

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI WIZARDS

    Corvac wasn't sure how he got into this situation, but he's now in another world, a familiar one, but still another world. He's lost, alone, and utterly confused with what to do, save what an old man told him while he was adrift; find a familia, and dive into the dungeon. It's risky. It's dangerous. But, it's something to do. Ain't got much else to do in this new life of his, so best make something of it, even if that'd find him just another lost soul to the maw of the Pit. Orario is a melting pot of culture and races from all corners of Genkai. Corvac will find that this melting pot draws all kinds. Many will be friendly to another outsider in this city of outsiders. Others see just another soul drawn to a city of sin, ready for exploitation. He'll need to keep his wits about him, if he wants to survive in this city of the gods. The Dungeon provides to all; wealth, fame, challenge, strength, and fortune. Its a trap, one that draws a sinful kind. The Dungeon is a battle ground, one Corvac might be a bit too willing to dive into; yet, he has no choice. For Orario's claws have sunk its bite into his heart, and now he has a bond that needs to thrive, and he is all that stands in the way of his future's demise. Here is a tale of a young man that sought to make a sense of life. Gifts were given and potential was allotted. He'll find love, responsibility, and must strive to uphold his virtues while indulging in his sins within this world he feels is always adrift. \---/ Authors Foreword: This novel is an SI-OC with Slice-of-Life elements, gory and descriptive action scenes, and a developing Original Character cast. Cannon Characters will be interacted with, but only when it makes sense for the MC to do so. He won't be chilling around with the Loki familias' Executives as a Level One. He'll do that when he's around their level and can interact with them as equals. This means that I'll be incorporating Original Familias and characters for Corvac to interact with. Cannon familias that are lower level will also be interacted with (Take being the only one that comes to mind, but I don't like many of their characters and will insert my own arc of Far Eastern familias). There will be a general plot beat being established of 'life stuff - combat scene - 'fun' slice of life - growth - character interactions - introduction/foreshadowing of elements that may be future enemies or allies - interactions/combat - maybe an interlude - loop. (I write in third person omniscient so I bounce perspectives often and don't make it clear who is gathering the narrator's information. This leads to possible instances of an unreliable narrator who purposely gives incorrect assumption and observations. There is also a lot of dialogue of Corvac talking to himself in the first person. This is him being analytical and thoughtful.) Falna Note: Any and all discussion on Corvac's growth rate, how he obtains certain skills or magics will be ignored brutally. The Falna functions on warped logic of 'souls' 'stories' and 'desires'. Magic also needs to be 'studied', which makes no sense when a person can only have three total spells in the setting and that magic is usually granted by Grimoires or racial benefits (fuckin' knife ears getting all the cool toys). Anyway, Corvac's falna is bullshit and was largely created via a CYOA prompt and my own creativity. I effectively rolled up a Danmachi DND sheet and just added cool spells and skills I thought would be interesting.

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  • Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi] original

    Inspired Enchanter [Danmachi]

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG LEVELUP EVOLUTION KILLER HIGHIQ EGOIST

    4.94

    Corwyn Hallows wandered Limbo for eons. In his journey, he'd found a strange object. Eons later, he came back to that object, and it offered him an accord. To live again, with a gift. He accepts this offer, and finds himself in an unfamiliar world of Gods and Adventurers. This is Corwyn's journey through Orario, the Dungeon City. Join him as he becomes a smith, an Adventurer, a warrior, an enchanter, and more. Updates: Whenever I feel like writing Inspired Enchanter Kronosday and Setsday - Now you have to translate that in normal days.

    18 Chs 3.3k Collections

  • Vici: I Conquered [One Piece] original

    Vici: I Conquered [One Piece]

    Anime & Comics OVERPOWERED VILLAIN HIGHIQ EGOIST

    Victor 'Vic' Vici doesn't remember much of his former life. An education, some piece of 'culture', but not even his name or sense of identity. To the young man who'd been spirited away, he wasn't even a person before the Game told him he was. Now in the world of One Piece, a world he somewhat recognized from his shattered memories, the young man seeks to solidify his fading sense of identity among a world of strong wills and steely egos. With power granted to him by both his Out-Of-Context ability, 'The Game' and his Devil Fruit, Victor seeks to carve his way through the Grand Line and become a force of nature to which the world will have no choice but to acknowledge and name. Victor is ready, he is willing to carve such into the very bones of the World if he must, and he has the tools to do so; but is the World ready for him?

    7 Chs 91 Collections

  • It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY) original

    It's Called Radiation, And It Glows Blue (Fallout/RWBY)

    Video Games ISEKAI RWBY

    Ivan Balor was once a normal dude from Earth, then he woke up a Glowing One Ghoul in a world that rings a distant bell with a set of memories that aren't his own. In the ashes of a burnt world so similar, yet dissimilar to his own, Ivan coasts along to survive for several decades. His ventures have led him to a point in his life in which a series of events sends him on a new adventure. This fiction will eventually cross over to RWBY/Remnant. Although, this crossover is a distant ways away and is more ACT 2 of ACT 1 than any crossover. IE, this is an Isekai. This fiction, or more specifically the character used and inspiration for this fiction was created through the usage of this Interactive Choose Your Own Adventure: https://kondor9543.neocities.org/fallout/index.html Ivan does not have memories of the Fallout Franchise due to a drawback called 'New Game'. No Artwork belongs to me and has been ripped off of Google Images. Message my Web Novel account to get no response for several business weeks to months, but I will eventually check and remove the artwork from either the cover or any message boxes. I only own Ivan and my OC's, any faction I've used is inspired from various other wasteland themed fictions that I subconsciously steal from. All rights go to those that actually own the franchise. This Fiction is solely written to day-dream about cyborg-girls killing shit in cool ways.

    7 Chs 207 Collections

  • Wizard Jaune (RWBY) original

    Wizard Jaune (RWBY)

    Anime & Comics MAGIC SUPERPOWERS URBAN MYTH WIZARDS UNDEAD

    Jaune Arc fuses with some random ass soul and gets Magic and an Overpowered Semblance Soul Fusion out of the entire 'death of identity, birth of anew' deal. Now a new person of clashing and often strange ideologies and world views, Jaune tackles the life and times of being a wizard, having really hot sisters, and being totally okay with putting his dick in them. Put two and two together: you get nine because magic is the shit. Join a magical tale of great power, magic, knowledge, and the mythical ability to just not give a shit. "Look upon ye, ye mighty, for it is here I grow my fucks. Witness its baren plane, unfertile soil, and grand expanse into unending desert." Jaune quoted poorly. "So...what's with the incest?" "Well, they're hot." Jaune shrugged. "Yeah, but they're your sisters." "Well, they should just not be hot then. Problem solved." Jaune frowned, crossing his arms. "That's not how this works." "So? I have magic, bibbity bobbity boo, now it does. Honestly, what's the problem?" Jaune asked, apathy in his gaze. "Incest is morally incorrect-" "Moral correctness is subjective to a group of people, and not objective to a single person or correct and singular way of thought." Jaune countered. "I could technically become my own independent thought group and think tank by claiming a plot of land and declaring myself independent. Vale wouldn't care, and I'd be leader of my new independent country, able to there by pass laws. These laws state that Incest is an acceptable and morally correct thing to do as long as nothing harmful comes from it." "The children might not come out right. Think of Joffrey!" "Psh, I have magic and can use a ritual to change myself into half demon or something and then fuck my sisters. Technically by changing my DNA, I'm only half related, and due to having alien DNA in my blood I'd be even more wonky in the entire 'bio diversity' argument." Jaune rebuffed. "Hmm, maybe...maybe." "Come, join the darkside. We have cookies, magic, lightning powers, plot armor second to one, and a dozen other thing besides."

    1 Chs 111 Collections

  • Snakeman In RWBY original

    Snakeman In RWBY

    Book&Literature ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION ISEKAI

    Lewds and Lemons, be warned and warry. Carrow died and was asked a question. This question led him to Remnant, the world of a shitty web show called RWBY. Now a snakeman by the name Basalin Chrome, he strives to become 'great', whatever that means. Featuring Ice Bitch, The Dashing Thief, and a few OCs. Trying not to become OC heavy and am desperately looking for way to add canon characters.

    17 Chs 279 Collections

  • Man of Many Masks [RWBY/GMOD] original

    Man of Many Masks [RWBY/GMOD]

    Video Games ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM DARK SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI

    When someone plays too much Garry's Mod, it does things to them. Dark, terrible things. Then you have God just chilling in OOC Chat like a boss. Two Role Players roll with their plays, no matter how dark and depraved.

    3 Chs 45 Collections

  • Putting The Devil Back In The Fruit [One Piece] original

    Putting The Devil Back In The Fruit [One Piece]

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SUPERPOWERS SURVIVAL ANTIHERO DEVIL ONEPIECE MYTH UNPRINCIPLED

    A messy reincarnation lead Carrow on a journey that won't end with friends or a happy nanmaka, but with leaking entrails and a mouth full of human flesh. This is the Tale of Carrow F. Wills, a botched reincarnate with goals to become the 'freest' man alive. This is no happy pirate story, but one where a twisted philosophy is deliberately miss translated and the end result is only exasperated further by a Devil Fruit that really puts the Devil in the Fruit. Absolute Freedom - The Freedom of Self, The Freedom of Space, The Freedom of Choice. To have no bonds, to have no wants, to be absolutely free!

    2 Chs 89 Collections

  • Ephemeral No Longer [TES SI] original

    Ephemeral No Longer [TES SI]

    Video Games ISEKAI

    Undeath in the Elder Scrolls Universe.

    4 Chs 33 Collections

  • Rusted Souls [RWBYxRust] original

    Rusted Souls [RWBYxRust]

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE VILLAIN SURVIVAL ISEKAI ANIME VIDEOGAME ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY MULTIPLELEADS RWBY WORM

    Three friends find themselves on Remnant, on the ass end of the planet; often referred to as Menagerie. They are not helpless however, with strange otherworldly and dare I say reality bending if not breaking abilities. Gifted knowledge, power, and immortality; may Oum have mercy on Remnant. Author Note: This story is a brain bubble that keeps on bugging. I was watching some Rust YouTube, and thought on how to bring rust abilities into a 'real' non-game-environment or at least beyond 'hit rock get '5' wood' like what is 5 wood? Then I thought of Worm and its tinker abilities and decided to 'fuse' the two, but what IS Rust Tech, and how do I incorporate scrap into this; what is scrap even? This spiraled down until I decided to scrap Rusts entire crafting system, keep the inventory and be ambiguous on the resources, less '100 wood' and more 'I chopped down X amount of trees and now have enough wood to build Y, the wood is stored in my inventory'. This will hopefully be explained more. The crafting is completely different and if that turns you away, so be it. What is the same: Building(ish) Guns (Dust and mechashift will have its place here) Respawning (bed down or spawn at origin point/random spawn on a beach of Menagerie)

    19 Chs 359 Collections

  • Killing With Kindness original

    Killing With Kindness

    Anime & Comics ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SCARY

    Welcome to reincarnation roulette. Three spins! Three powers! One world! Whats the catch? Each spin after the first three free spins given, will give the greedy foul a 'curse'. Will you test your luck and greed? John Dour was once a simple electrician. Then he died. It was fortunate he was chosen for reincarnation, right? Well no one told him that he couldn't spin more than three times. A second chance at life becomes something, insane.

    2 Chs 18 Collections

  • Arc The Necromancer original

    Arc The Necromancer

    Others ROMANCE VILLAIN ANTIHERO UNDEAD

    Arc is someone who is a Cynical, Paranoid, and Edgy, gets an ability to travel into worlds of anime, fiction, movie, and television. He gallivants on a journey aided by no-one, restricted by no-one, and is stripped of human ethics and morality. God will not help, as I am God. I will watch my creation run amok in the fictional worlds created by others. Stop him if you can, but none shall stand in his path of being an absolute asshole.

    1 Chs 135 Collections