Well firstly thank you for your opinion. I know not everyone freezes in such situations, and Luke himself does change from to something far colder and more ruthless etc, throughout the coming chapters. So i hope you do give them a try and if you don't, well that is your choice.
"I said talk!" The guard while jabbing his spear threateningly in the direction of Luke, the other guards having now began to move around, trying to slowly enclose and trap Luke between them all. Luke could see all of this, and yet he did not move, nor did he talk. He was just frozen, and standing here his eyes glued to the glistening metal tip of the spear that was pointing at him.
Fantasy · DragonRiderOfHell
Thank you for the review, it truly does mean alot to me. As for the grammatical errors, I am going to be going through and editing slowly, it just is getting the time. And please do spread it out among your friends
thank you...this helps and means so much to me fr
mass release is harddd. but i will see
It is coming, I promise you. Far sooner than you think and it seems, I just wanted to set up the character fully before throwing everything sideways into war. PS. I want the war to start to
Thank you for being such an amazing person
hey, i am glad that you sre liking it so far, and thank you for the review!
thank you for the review. i promise it will speed up soon😁
im glad you liked the start, and trust me when i say, there are many more climaxes to come..and twists and turns. far better than anything before
I am glad that you liked it!
The Grand Marshal
Fantasy · DragonRiderOfHell