Aquacious

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2019-01-26 Joined Australia
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Aquacious
Aquacious
10 months ago
Replied to Aquacious

I have confirmation that this prose-like language gets better after Padre, but please, retranslate this section after the novel is done.

Aquacious
Aquacious
10 months ago
Replied to 0Jeal0

Yea it’s the translator, cktalon, who seems to have just discovered a thesaurus.

Aquacious
Aquacious
10 months ago
Posted

He’s done it again. Read the other reviews cuz they explain it well. This review is for the translator. My guy, the words you are using might be big, but they ain’t grammatically correct most of the time. I’m not sure which level of education you finished at, but that doesn’t mean the story needs to be forced into your ‘pristine’ language. Yes I can understand ‘…inquired with a calm resolve…’ but would it not be easier for everyone if you just wrote ‘… asked calmly…’? Less for you to write, easier for us to understand. Like, even famous novels from older authors don’t do this. To Kill a Mockingbird is simple to read, same with The Great Gatsby or The Stormlight Archive. So why do you feel the need to make it more difficult for us readers to read? And is this not harder on yourself? Might as well just go read Shakespeare at this point.

Aquacious
Aquacious
1 years ago
Posted

Gimme more pls. I need I need I need i need

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Commented

Chinese dragon?

[ Bloodline recovery: the silent and ancient bloodline of His will eventually be revived, the mythical snake of the world will also eventually descend (current recovery rate is 1%).]

Evolve into a Dragon after Surviving a Nuclear Blast

Evolve into a Dragon after Surviving a Nuclear Blast

Fantasy · Survival Player

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Commented

Finally, a starting comment from the system that doesnt roast the MC

[ Remarks: Awesome! Among your brothers and sisters, you are the one with the hardest fists! Use brute force to hunt your food! ]

Reincarnated as a Red Dragon, Discipline Makes Me Stronger!

Reincarnated as a Red Dragon, Discipline Makes Me Stronger!

Urban · Seventh Face of Magic

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Commented

Transmigrator*

"Is this the golden finger of a trasmigrator…"

I Have A Martial Arts Panel

I Have A Martial Arts Panel

Action · Vanguard Flaming Pig

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Commented

They say phoenixes are as rare as chickens

According to the knowledge he had learned in the academy, in this world, mental cultivation techniques were manuals that were as rare as phoenix feathers and qilin horns. They were incomparably precious.

Global Cultivation: First-time Top-up for the Ultimate Destiny Treasure

Global Cultivation: First-time Top-up for the Ultimate Destiny Treasure

Eastern · Crustacean

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Commented

Receptionist????

"Of course, Miss Warfarin. You're my first receptionist. How could I forget you?"

I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!

I am a Scarecrow and the Demon Lord of Terror!

Fantasy · Laughter and Joy

Aquacious
Aquacious
3 years ago
Replied to danoof

Exactly what i was thinking

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