mikoschele

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https://www.arechnocadia.com/

2019-01-24 Joined Germany
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mikoschele
mikoschele
2 years ago
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He is better at naming as I am. Like I called my Company Arechnocadia Company... yes 2 times company in the name... [img=recommend]

Pei Qian contemplated for a moment before filling the space with his thoughts: Tengda Network Technology Co., Ltd.

Losing Money to Be a Tycoon

Losing Money to Be a Tycoon

Games · Inebriation-seeking Blue Shirt

mikoschele
mikoschele
2 years ago
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that's a year my boisss

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
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dumb ways to die. So many dumb ways to die.

There was no ventilation in the shelter yet, hence the burning torch in the shelter could easily deplete the oxygen in the underground base.

My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!

My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!

Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
Commented

that, right there makes a good story. consideration to the story, outside of your mc.

Apart from Bai Zemin, there were other people who also dared to fight or simply had no choice but to fight if they wanted to survive. As a consequence, there were several people who had their own fortuitous experiences, gaining powerful skills and treasures that did not belong to this world.

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · XIETIAN

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
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The writing Quality is top notch. I did stumble on some lines, which got me out of my reading Flow. But otherwise, it got me hooked. I like how the story is developing, not much known, but till know it does not sound bad. What I found a bit lacking was the Village dynamic. I was a bit Lost on the backgrounds of the Characters or what's happening. A bit more in detail of the goings around the Situation would be appreciated. Otherwise, the Characters, where Interesting, some were quite cliche I think. Which is not bad It's just that we are missing some background of why their action are like this if they had known her for long. Or if they always hated her. A reason for their action more than just the simple. I’m poor so I need money. Because of the "that" we are now like "this". More than 2 Layers are appreciated. Otherwise, it's a great beginning to a Story, with some flaws, but those are not strong enough to impact the story and can be easily explained later. With some edits on the beginning and I would not notice the difference between a Professional take on the Story and yours. Great read! P.S. I commented on the section which brought me out of the flow of reading.

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
Commented

"shooting trough her body" It's more of the shoulder wound getting ice cold water into it. Or has the Arrow pierced right trough her shoulder? Is it still stuck in her Shoulder, its not right? Before you said Bone right, so is it broken? I'm not quite sure. Sry just got me a bit tangled there.

Ravynne fell from the high cliffs above into the water below. She waved her arms and gasped for air as she tried to stay afloat, pain from the arrow shooting through her body, the ice cold water stabbing her flesh and rushing into her lungs. It was almost debilitating, but she had to survive.

The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
Commented

What's the diffrence between shoulder and shoulder blade? In this context?

Suddenly, she yelped in pain and clutched her arm as a burning and stinging sensation whipped across it. "She's over here!" In front of Ravynne lay an arrow with red liquid covering the tip. She looked at her hand, it was covered in blood. Her eyes widened and an involuntary moan escaped her mouth as an arrow plunged into her shoulder blade.

The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
Commented

"and" combining the sentence "the sun down" and "never been in the woods before" trough and feels kinda tripy. Got me out of the flow of reading your story.

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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
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and or as ??? What in this term is the right usage???

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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

mikoschele
mikoschele
3 years ago
Commented

3 Paragraph brought me abit out, anybody else? "This is how..."

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The Aurelian Empire

The Aurelian Empire

Fantasy · Thalia_Ilace

  • Arechnocadia Origin original

    Arechnocadia Origin

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY TRAGEDY APOCALYPSE

    Arechnocadia, your average RUN-OF-THE-MILL action-adventure lore book from your next-door neighbor. It has all the normal things a book has words, Phrases, Abyss like monster with spider claws and Human teeth, Cursed Artifacts, and not to forget: Leroy, your average teen with a sprinkle of idealism, an overworking work ethic and an unhealthy addiction to the internet. Follow him as he gets one of his worst Nightmares become reality. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is the origin Story to Arechnocadia's Mirror match in the Arechnocadia Omniverse and the start of the Project Book series. To find out more check out the Lore section of Arechnocadia: https://www.arechnocadia.com/lore Or check out our newest Writing Project / Giant universal scale TTRPG: https://www.arechnocadia.com/project-book

    14 Chs 1 Collections

  • The Healer who wants to become a Swordsman original

    The Healer who wants to become a Swordsman

    Fantasy ADVENTURE HEALING

    There once was Milo. he loved to watch the guards of his town train. So, he sometimes sneaked over and trained with them. Till one day his caretaker found him exercise. The sad truth came to light. Healers aren’t allowed to train their bodies as it goes against the believe that god made them perfect. Shattered milo tries to come to term with it. But on a special day his class got revealed. As all kids coming of age get their class read. To choose their future path. Milos class was revealed to be a healer. Yes, a healer the weakest link of a group never to be allowed to fight or live long for that part of it. Follow milo as he tries to go against the path, he is chosen for. This story is part of Arechnocadia. For those enjoying it or are curious about Arechnocadia can join my patreon or discord. Discord for those enjoying the Product and being curious about more: https://discord.gg/8SbYHxR (I don’t mind people just wanting to talk) Patreon for those hoping to support me or join it officially: https://www.patreon.com/Arechnocadia

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  • Dungeon Controll original

    Dungeon Controll

    Fantasy ACTION

    Alex your average teenager with a twist. He is addicted to strategy and base building game. But not in a health way. Every single Game he played he became better and better. To the point of 0 loses on his Smurf accounts. But scared and shy as he is, he made a “fake identity”. One day on his school trip to the museum of lost artifacts. Your average Museum with a little bit of idea and ta bit of boring. The most attractive item of todays bucket list is. The destiny stone found in Egypt buried by sand. Interesting enough it entails a tale which magically translate when read by others. Interested he goes for a dip after being pushed by others to read it. After saying the last line, he vanishes. To never be seen again. Funny enough it became a hit by many spreading so fast it became a folk lore. That was the introduction and now comes the interesting part. Dungeon control is your average base building survival horror story with an extra. It comes from Arechnocadia one of my Projects and lives in the same multiverse. You will see Alex do stuff never been done before by others. It entails a system explained by the first chapter and history plus elements already known by many readers. It’s quite interesting if you ask me but be aware, I’m not almighty so if you notice some contradiction or just mindshit pls tell. Every criticism is great if it entails: 1. The problem 2. The solution If you enjoy the story check out my webpage "arechnocadia.com" and join the Project.

    1 Chs 3 Collections

  • Arechnocadia original

    Arechnocadia

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG EVOLUTION

    Arechnocadia you average one of the mill action adventure lore book from next door. It has all the normal thing a book has words, Phrases, Abyss like monster with spider claws and teeth, Cursed Artifacts and not to forget Leroy your average teen with a sprinkle of idealism, an overworking work ethic, an unhealthy addiction to the internet and your one of the mill otaku loving piece of malware. Follow him as he gets one of his worst Nightmare become reality.   So, what about the Name? Ah the Name simple Arechnocadia is not your average book. No, no, no. It’s an in-depth lore guide to the Project Arechnocadia Books. It’s one of many under the category of Arechnocadia.   For those loving Leroy why not check out my webpage "arechnocadia.com". Or you could check out my other work. Have fun and tudelu.

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  • A lie between dimensions original

    A lie between dimensions

    Fantasy SCARY

    ;) A lie between dimension is part of the Project Arechnocadia. To find out more, join my discord: https://discord.gg/8SbYHxR

    3 Chs 0 Collections

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