so far, chaps 1 cukup menarik
iya kak gapapa. makaih y atas msukannya
Maaf ya kak, ini lagi proses perapian kak. insyaAllah bab selanjutnya udah lebih rapi
Ceritanya Alifah ini benar2 benar beda dari yg lain sih... Aku amaze lihat Kamu nyantumin banyak Ayat Al Quran dan kasih edukasi yang bagus soal agama terutama di novel Kamu, kayanya jarnag juga novel yg temanya kaya novel Kamu. Karakter Alifa sendiri, Aku lumayan suka tapi masih agak bias, mungkin perlu dikembangin lagi ya... Kadang kalau nulis cerita yang sangat straight, emang agak dilema sih... Maqu dibuat straight banget atau ada melencengnya, semangat terus ya pokoknya!!!!
Yasss, I agree (tapi novel aku ceritanya banyak yg pacran. mau nangis...)
Pacaran? No way
Teen · syafiuni
sallallahu alaihi wasallam
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Teen · syafiuni
semua anak di dunia kayanya benci hari senin deh, heheheh
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Teen · syafiuni
jangan alifah, bukan mahram!!!!
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Teen · syafiuni
Hi dear, We have same interesting story, writing novel based from Korea. I'm enjoying your plot story. I know that yours is MAKJANG enough, Korean drama typically. But it's ok because this is the genre which is still enjoyed a lot if people. I still read some early chaps, I found that the Man is in villain mode, I still couldn't guess where the story would bring us. Still clueless but it's fine because not many story who involved married man as male lead in General romance story. Hwaiting Author!!!! -Hyeona-
saya tertarik membacanya berawal dari sinopsisnya. kalimat demi kalimatnya rapi dan memiliki struktur bahasa baku yang enak dibaca sehingga pembaca sangat mudah memahami alurnya karena seringkali masih banyak author yang kirang pandai menyusun kalimat baku agar enak dibaca. semangat terus ya authornya
LOVE SICKNESS
Urban · Blueside