Kataya_Moon

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I am an enigma

2019-01-15 Joined United States
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Kataya_Moon
Kataya_Moon
4 years ago
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it's a decent comic. there's some confusion in the beginning with how it skips. the translation made it hard to follow. had to stop reading due to it.

Kataya_Moon
Kataya_Moon
4 years ago
Replied to CandeeMichelle

you deleted it I seen the comment before. we can also see other comments made. we all accept criticism but there's a way to give constructive criticism.

Seeing the confusion cross her face he patiently waited until she spoke to him. "I'm Takeyasu Sagara. You got sick on me and I took care if you." He watched as she tried to put two and two together. He noticed something was wrong and when he heard the truth understanding and sadness battled within him. She was in love with victor and he was in love with her but she didn't recognize him and was in pain from the knowledge she could never tell her feelings to him. Something in him broke.

I've Loved You From Afar

I've Loved You From Afar

Urban · Kataya_Moon

Kataya_Moon
Kataya_Moon
4 years ago
Replied to Kataya_Moon

Also, you shouldn't go around trashing other authors work. It's not easy being a writer. oh, and FYI English is my native language I took the time to research the Korean language and explained it during the book.

Seeing the confusion cross her face he patiently waited until she spoke to him. "I'm Takeyasu Sagara. You got sick on me and I took care if you." He watched as she tried to put two and two together. He noticed something was wrong and when he heard the truth understanding and sadness battled within him. She was in love with victor and he was in love with her but she didn't recognize him and was in pain from the knowledge she could never tell her feelings to him. Something in him broke.

I've Loved You From Afar

I've Loved You From Afar

Urban · Kataya_Moon

Kataya_Moon
Kataya_Moon
4 years ago
Replied to CandeeMichelle

I'm sorry you feel the way. I'm not sure which words you mean because I do make mention what they are. if you don't want to keep reading the book you don't have to it's already completed. You're the only person that has said something this rude before.

Seeing the confusion cross her face he patiently waited until she spoke to him. "I'm Takeyasu Sagara. You got sick on me and I took care if you." He watched as she tried to put two and two together. He noticed something was wrong and when he heard the truth understanding and sadness battled within him. She was in love with victor and he was in love with her but she didn't recognize him and was in pain from the knowledge she could never tell her feelings to him. Something in him broke.

I've Loved You From Afar

I've Loved You From Afar

Urban · Kataya_Moon

Kataya_Moon
Kataya_Moon
4 years ago
Replied to Lil_vy

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