Jester3461

wow this feels like a good end to a war game between Steve and Seth, gotta admit I didn't see this coming, kinda wish Steve set out some sort of punishment to Seth afterwards after all he's done, but it feels good as is.

this was pretty much out of nowhere for me, I thought it would be the citizens not those anime women

oh man that seems like someone had beaten Steven to the punch in aura objects, I'm thinking by this point we all know who this player two is! XD

I remember when I first read the prelude to a player two being chosen, I first thought it was going to be James who was going to become player two, but now it seems this player two is very subtle and conservative with their edits, I can't wait to see what else happens :)

I guess I could say the best part of the chapter was in the beginning where the explanation of the improvements around the school and people had taken place along with a time skip, the part with James kinda felt a little off, like he was burning out or something but also struggling to discover something about himself after realizing he could literally make anything he wanted so long as he could draw it. in a sense I felt bad for Orihime and Ruri because of all the demands for James commissions, it almost feels like he doesn't even know himself anymore.

whew! this is quite the difficult task of finding the second editor, no one known in the school or church, and other things happening is interesting as developments go

oh man oh man this got interesting, two people able to edit reality and they may be opponents at that? I am certainly very interested in finding out what this mysterious Player Two is up to haha!

looked it up what a gingham looked like and what Chun-Li iconically wore was called a varied design of a cheongsam.

when good intentions take a wrong turn hahaha! that was a good twist at the end there!

the ability to edit reality and change it one person at a time can have large scale impacts or small ones based on causality if I got this correct?