Pretty good, albeit generic story; however please, please, please do some basic editing on your chapters even if it's using a basic text processor to fix capital letters, spacing, etc. It would vastly improve the reading quality without even needing to change anything major or put too much effort into.
Pretty good, albeit generic story; however please, please, please do some basic editing on your chapters even if it's using a basic text processor to fix capital letters, spacing, etc. It would vastly improve the reading quality without even needing to change anything major or put too much effort into.