comma before because, not where it currently is
I rolled my eyes but chose not to say anything because if our positions were reversed, I would definitely grab her ass as well.
Sci-fi · Draekai
Passage should read "...and expect me not to grab it."
She smiled at me, "What? You can't show me such a delicious behind and not expect me not to grab it."
Sci-fi · Draekai
Double negative. What Amber is currently saying is that she doesn't what to get a handful
She smiled at me, "What? You can't show me such a delicious behind and not expect me not to grab it."
Sci-fi · Draekai
Unnghhh! So sweet! So good!! Wait… What was I talking about again?
Fantasy · Draekai
Waaahhh!! Me want!! Om nom nom nom~
Fantasy · Draekai
"Cookie, Young Mistress?" Mary offered, materialising a cookie out of thin air.
Fantasy · Draekai
I was just going to comment: "Didn't you do that just a couple chapters ago?" but you beat me to it. Selective memory, I guess.
Holy shit, Eins, you girls are really sadistic!
Fantasy · Draekai
I think it's supposed to be auction instead of action?
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Fantasy · IPI
Ok. Thank you. The way I read it, I thought she was just talking about the prize pool
Damn… So we would each be getting… Twenty one million, four hundred and fifty thousand Credits each?!
Sci-fi · Draekai
Right… Just gonna record this and save it for later then…
What Do You Mean I'm The Captain Of A Yandere Mercenary Company?
Sci-fi · Draekai