GreyingRaven

GreyingRaven

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Not much to say. Just love reading

2018-11-09 Joined Ireland
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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
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+1

2. The concept of this story is unusual and far from my usual reading. 

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
Commented

+1

1. This story is still good, I'm curious for the next volumes.

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Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
Commented

+1

1. The multiple POVs are interesting and don't seem like fillers.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
Commented

+1

1. I'm satisfied with the slow pace.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
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+1

3. This story gives me mixed feelings.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
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+1

1. The characters seem human to me.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
Commented

+1

1. The protagonist is Enjoyable.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 months ago
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+1

GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
2 months ago
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+1 Often the loud minority can overshadow the silent majority. Don't let some criticism stop your creativity. I hardly ever comment, but if it helps, I'm enjoying your story, it might have some mistakes here and there but overall it's interesting and a fun read.

2. I like this development, I want to see the sequel of this story as it is.

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GreyingRaven
GreyingRaven
1 years ago
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