She lost someone who she saw as a son, a member of her family. Her ONLY family (human). Even if that wasn’t the case and they were dating/lovers and he died. She is allowed to remember him. Yes sometimes relationships turn toxic when you compare a deceased love to a living one, looking for something that was lost. But remembering? Loving? Her memories of him solidify and honor his existence even if he’s gone. If she just ‘forgot’ or ‘ignored’ that he existed than that in my opinion is far more toxic.
But Cyrus...
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
Why did people have to complain about the way the MC talked…now look what we have instead. This.
"Or you could show some appreciation for the guy who brought this to your attention." Cyrus gestured at his ruined clothing. "These pants weren't cheap, you know."
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
She’s associated with Death-Resurrection and Knowledge so I can see her figuring that out even if only a suspicion since resurrection/reincarnation isn’t unheard of in this world.
"You fight like you've lived multiple lives," Quet said. "Different styles. Different teachers. All mixed together."
Anime & Comics · WisteriaNovels
I don’t think it’s really needed, even what you have here in this chapter is enough in my opinion. If you want to do more then sure but only because you want to or feel like it adds to the story, if next chapter you move right to the end of it or onto something else I don’t believe anyone currently reading would be upset. I’ll vote to stick with how the rest of the story has dealt with these scenes 👌🏻
[1] There are several options for this sex scene. The main one is to just skip it. The second is to touch on it briefly. The third, which I don't really want to do, is write a full one. I'll make a decision based on the input of you horny degenerates.
Anime & Comics · hmak27230
Woah…a Clone that’s more self aware than the original
The Clone-kun forcefully stopped his train of depressing thoughts. He was probably created with a small flaw. Such a depressing mental monologue was not Ren's usual thing but it happened to him quite often. It was annoying.
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
“Or maybe too great a Wizard to perform magic and that too a corporeal Patronus, with a mindscape like this” So it does make sense but the sentence structure makes it hard to read (a theme I’m noticing with the entire book so far). “Such a pathetic Wizard I was…” Harry exclaimed while observing his dark and gloomy mindscape. “With a mind as bitter and cold as this, it’s a wonder I was even able to cast magic at all, let alone a corporeal Patronus that requires positive emotions.” (Something like that, still not perfect but it works atleast in getting the point across).
"Or maybe too great a wizard to perform magic that too a corporeal Patronus, with a mindscape like this," he added after a pause with a chuckle.
Book&Literature · book_paradise
Every beginning has an end, and every end is a new beginning - Santosh Kalwar
Anime & Comics · hmak27230
"Hmph, I don't even know why I was made the Goddess of Oaths when oaths made in my name mean nothing!" She threw her hands up in a rare display of anger. "Even their children, what am I supposed to do? Punish thechildren of the King of Godsor the others? They're immortal; I have no power over them!"
Book&Literature · AStoryForOne
"Hmph, I don't even know why I was made the Goddess of Oaths when oaths made in my name mean nothing!" She threw her hands up in a rare display of anger. "Even their children, what am I supposed to do? Punish thechildren of the King of Godsor the others? They're immortal; I have no power over them!"
Book&Literature · AStoryForOne
Good example of why “Show, Don’t Tell” is the golden rule of writing a story. When a story is 80%-90% tell—like this has been so far—it pushes you away rather than draw you in. You are reading the story rather than experiencing it…and that’s sad.
So, he needed a plan.
Transmigration: Into the Life of Severus Snape
Book&Literature · Maggie329