ofc its fiction , what do you expect here? if you love reality, then stop reading novels. no one is forcing you to read them.
"How do you feel? Two girls... are not enough to satisfy me!" He pondered seriously, although in the game [Transcendence], it is not uncommon for the strong to have multiple spousal partners.
Awakening：The Infinite Evolution of My Talent as a Low-Level Awakener
Fantasy · Whisk92
I thought lucas was a genderbender going to be added to harem
"ATTENTION! THE AWAKENING CEREMONY WILL NOW BEGIN. PLEASE TAKE YOUR DESIGNATED POSITIONS."
Incubus Living In A World Of Superpower Users
Fantasy · Anime_timez24
no harem? fck u author strongest family and no harem is an idiotic combination
nice gray, white, we have a rainbow story
Gray was sitting on the ground when he heard footsteps getting near him. When he looked up, he saw his manager, Mr. White.
Suddenly, I Am Rich
Urban · EggYoolk
let's get back to reality and now think, how many powerful people don't have harems? majority have , only some don't. so if it's in a novel, with power to get to the top of the world, why would mc not have a harem?
there is no need of money the author is not the author he is just stealing free books from somewhere else Give me likes and I will reveal the location
the point of reading novels is exactly about what you cant do in reality. so what's the problem with harem?
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This is not to demean you author or your work. Just take it as a constructive feedback. English and grammar needs some work updates are excellent but slightly longer chapters would be better. maybe make a patreon to fund your work story dev is shaky, anything happens anytime.There is no smooth flow.sit down, plan your story arcs better so that they interconnect characters the girls are good, how did you fck up the mc? he is very narcissistic and sometimes brainless. He has a system, he should be more confident, calm and composed and not like a teenager. Ruthless he is , i like that but others need to be improved upon World background is not explained properly. At least a map where the size of his current kingdom compared to overall world size or maybe a floating continent of light years in size. Also the mage tiers are very weird. Maybe you should rethink the tiers and also the power gaps between each tiers. If you improve on these points, i will give you a solid 5 star. You can ask me for some inputs if you need, i will be happy to help cause i am a sucker for incest fantasy op mc novels.
if i get 100m dollars overnight, i wont care what my local neighbours say about me.
The insults were thrown naked and clear, yet Neo didn't even flinch. He was already confident in his own worth; it couldn't be diminished by a boy drunk on power and arrogance.
Building Interstellar Empire With Universal Synthesis
Sci-fi · Limitbreaker01