Which country is this black palace from ?
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: High-Efficiency Healing Liquid (Seeking Recommendations and Reviews)
Horror · Riding Waves To Find The Boat
I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.
ch 70 Situation out of Hand? (1)
Fantasy · Emberlight
The Illuminati would’ve hit better. I’m not loving illuminatos
ch 239 Lady Fate
Fantasy · PandaDumpling
I think the uncommon pathways might non- blasphemy slate pathways and also non divine pathways. meaning you reach angel at max and not reach god level. Or some kind debilitation. The mixing of pathways sounds interesting but it’s highly likely to turn someone into a monster, also, they would still be part of the 22 wouldn’t they?
ch 26 Whistleblowing
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Yeah. especially when he saw Klein. Even high sequence fate path beyonders didn’ want to see Klein.
It has incredibly strong tracking abilities, and I can't discount the possibility that it possesses some sort of superpowers, much like Aurore…
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
Is this the western continent. The parts blocked off by fog. It makes sense if this is this was formerly France
She wore a snug white pleated cashmere dress with a small off-white coat and a pair of Marseillan boots. There were two tiny silver bells fastened to her veil and boots. They jingled as she walked into the tavern, drawing the attention of many—especially the men.
Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
True. Atleast Camilla’s situation could understood since it was her stepmom trying to protect her son or whatever. But this is just ridiculous.
But after only a moment of hesitation, she didn't hide anything and said: "I just realized that the Lionheart Family has never intended to let a woman take the helm, no matter how outstanding they are. If I obediently married as a political chip, I would still have some value. But I refused. And some of the elders in my family felt that I had no value if I didn't choose to marry, even seen as a threat, so they made their move. And my brothers are interested in stealing the 'hero fate'... Overall, there are many who don't want me to leave the ruins alive."
Catastrophe Card King
Games · Blindness