Starting simple the story , most of the time when I m reading in the first chapter I always get a feeling that interest me the way you express to your readers let them intrigue or suspend is to get them hooked then on the next ones explaining in detail if you want, I’m not telling you who to do what you do I just explained how to get your readers to get hooked .
good one buddy, like your cliff hanger.
Give you this one only, because I admire your boldness.
You are over reaching Bro , Premium at !5 chapter....Come on. come on,
This is a good Novel guys is one of my top 5.
I starter this 14 chapters and is development is coming Perry good so far, I do recommend this novel you Guys is got something and I think is going to be be one of the good ones and I read a lots of novels in this web page.
You got it 👍
give me more chapters, plz...plz...plz..
what is the chapter....!!!!! 1/2 of the letters are all mix, there's must be an error I think,Fix it PLZ.
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Fantasy · HotIce