lairfin

lairfin

male LV 14

wuxia lover

2018-08-07 Joined France
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Moments 37
lairfin
lairfin
4 months ago
Posted

Lord of the mysteries : break them mirrors!

lairfin
lairfin
5 months ago
Commented

I would had that ”chie” in french means to take a dump. It specially appeals to the ”pot de chambre” which means chamber pot.

Someone had scratched out 'Rue du Pot de Chambre' with a stone and scrawled a new name beside it: "Rue Anarchie."

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

lairfin
lairfin
5 months ago
Posted

Good novel, impaired by an inconsistent translation.

lairfin
lairfin
6 months ago
Posted

Disappointed by the development of the story. Horror is a tricky topic, telling a character is afraid does not suffice to render an horrific atmosphere. We end up in a light tone and unoriginal system novel.

lairfin
lairfin
6 months ago
Posted

The world building is terrific, the story leads you where you don’t expect. However the MC’s depression arcs are killing a bit the tempo. Once is okay, but we get it again and again... Another minor complaint : world building of the dregs, those inconsistent numbers about liters and demography (just think about the number of corpses they get) are a little petpeaves for me. If it’s published in books i suggest to review this points a bit.

lairfin
lairfin
6 months ago
Commented

not sure you would want to work with a spectre that gives diarrhea

"I've had diarrhea for the last week, but I didn't change my diet."

Kill the Sun

Kill the Sun

Fantasy · Warmaisach

lairfin
lairfin
10 months ago
Commented

she just had to log in sigma, and he carelessly exposed his intentions before. What a sloppy murder...

lairfin
lairfin
1 years ago
Commented

my dear uncle, I’m enjoying my vacations in the shadows of the pyramids. Here is a little memory. xoxo Mordret

"...It's Shtad. It's Shtad's head."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

lairfin
lairfin
1 years ago
Commented

It would be fun if the nightmare acknowledged the name. For instance in a memory made from one of its planks : ”coming from the ship Chain Breaker, baptized by the treacherous Lost from Light.”

"...Chain Breaker. Let's call it that."

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

lairfin
lairfin
1 years ago
Commented

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'Ah, I have forgotten how awkward she really is. She's hiding it well these days… it's cute. Huh? Crude, I meant it's crude!'

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree