Can you stick with one name to call him when he is not talking to anybody. It gets confusing when you switch between three names.
I wouldn't mind either, but would you be fine releasing a lot of chapters like that if you go premium. A lot of authors get burnt out or lose motivation after rushing chapters.
If you want to go premium I think it would depend on the money involved, with the views on the book right now I don't think you will make a lot of money on patr eon. Thanks for the chapter.
I found it through one of the tags.
I like the story so far and the other novel ideas look interesting.
I liked your story so far.
You should try to use grammarly, it would fix most of the problems like capitalization and grammar.
it's called the immortals wine.
I respect your opinion, but I didn't mind the way the story was going. Keep up the good work.
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