Dude I don’t care if you only wrote 4 chapters a week…as long as you keep this story up that all that matters.
Would it be okay if we switch to a Monday to Saturday schedule? With Sundays off for dear ole me? Just a suggestion, lemme know what you guys think!
Movies · AmaanS_
Cerci next.
From the new Superman movie.
"The Sun," Tony murmured, his voice soft but deliberate, "is composed of 73.46577342% hydrogen, 24.85346258% helium, 0.773568% oxygen, 0.2900240% carbon, 0.1635727% iron, 0.121688367% neon, 0.09982452% nitrogen, 0.0724624673% silicon, 0.053577447% magnesium, 0.04030463% sulfur…" His palms began to glow, particles gathering between them like grains of golden dust drawn from the void.
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
Tour No both/harem plz.
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It’s not pink, it’s Magenta.
The Ancient One thought for a moment. "Pink."
Movies · Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Yes! Say no to harem.
No, Single FMC
Anime & Comics · Chimp2003
What I dislike most about your story is that every MC of your are too trusting, too goody two shoes. Take this story for example….it start of so good but turn to terrible after the MC meet the X-Men and the Avenger. Now I don’t mean that I want you to write an anti hero story but make the MC have more depth, more personality instead of just being a “good guy”
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Movies · Najicablitz626
This is a plot issue…yes Iron Island have slave but people tend to ignore them because of the culture of the Iron Island. However Tarth is different, and nothing can cover up the MC bought slaves…you think people on the Island wouldn’t snitch on you just because you make their life better? But the religion of the Seven doesn’t allow slaves so some of the religious zealots WILL snitch. And the MC is not strong enough to fight the might of the 6 kingdoms. This is such a big plot issue that ruin the story. It’s might be better if you explain that you bought slave but you free them and paid them for their work instead of saying that nobody gonna know because this is an island.
Most people on Tarth were extremely afraid of those large amounts of bees, so Galladon had to buy slaves from Myr to carry out the honey and further process it.
TV · marcoo
Ok author….we already known the name of the five elders…why can’t you just correct it before posting?
One Piece: Starting By Playing Gilgamesh Template.
Anime & Comics · Void_Verse1