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The peak of humans should be higher in GoT since it's a magical world right?

I have read the manhwa and both sisters are great. MC is one lucky son of a gun.

I feel like he gonna bump into those mother and daughter a d somehow save them.

Yeah he's half the reason Minato died because he stopped Uchiha clan.

Author ignore them. Yes it's a modern family fanfic but his life has already developed. Now it obviously can't revolve around the main cast only. Things are going to happen in his life. Once something personal happens then obviously Modern family cast will appear since they are all his friends. They have nothing to do with his business or career so they won't appear in those chapters. It's as simple as that. Plus that Gacha is OP.

Natsuha

What does MC actually want to do? His thought process suddenly goes 180. Like I know you said he wants to be a good guy but the way you write it comes off as sarcastic. So it just doesn't feel like a real goal. Till now, it feels like the only reason he wants to be with the girls is because he's trying to be a good guy. It feels like his personality is lacking. Like he doesn't express his desires like a normal person. His actions comes from a motivation that most readers can't relate to.

He can take his women to other world right? Will he take them to Demon slayer? Because after killing Muzan and creating a business empire there, it would be a pretty great place to live.

Because he writing it in a fast pace. Otherwise story would barely progress with chapter release speed.

Plus borrowing some of their power and borrowing all of their power is very different. You actually made him borrow all of Four tails power. Hell let's even say that Roshi could forcibly borrow all of Four tails power, Four tails actively helping him resist Genjutsu and cooperating with in fight made no sense at all.

Since Tailed beasts are sealed,the jinchuriki can forcibly borrow their power. Like Mito could from Nine tails. What you are writing is literally a perfect jinchuriki. Four tails is actively helping him and cooperating with Roshi to fight. How is this any different from Killer B? We know for a fact that Killer B was the first perfect jinchuriki. This was a really important detail and you should have researched it properly.

Please don't use AI much because it kinda of add useless details and break the rhythm of the story. Your own writing is much better and more realistic. AI just beautifies any or all scenes.

If breathing style really drained vitality then Urokodaki Sakonji wouldn't be alive and teaching people. Is this a head cannon you decided to add into the story?

Roshi and Han could use Tailed beast's power but only forcefully. Four tails and Five tails did not actively help them. What you are showing right now is a perfect jinchuriki which only Killer B could achieve before Naruto. If Five tails helped Roshi dispell illusion that means they have already reached an understanding. That would make Roshi perfect jinchuriki. But in canon they could only borrow their power forcefully just like Mito. Mito could use Nine Tail's power but that didn't mean they had reached an understanding.

Pakura and Rasa being almost elite jonins at the age of 13 is a bit too much. Even Minato was 16 when he had the strength of a elite jonin.

Yeah it has Gods and so many mythical beings.

Yeah plus hentai girls are even more easier to impress.

It's not that Kagaya is telling cliche story but that everyone in demon slayer team has experienced it first hand that's why they get emotional. Meanwhile MC sees it as a story from previous life plus he has cheat that makes him confident that he would never go through things that Hashira's went through. That's why he's taking it lightly.