CallmeGo

male LV 6

I read novels.I read novels.

2018-06-29 Joined Global
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CallmeGo
CallmeGo
8 months ago
Replied to Praisethesun

from 12 am to 12 am for 7 days a week I think since 996 means from 9 am to 9 pm 6 days a week

If this guy can surrender, let alone 996, even 007 will not be a dream!

King Arthur Won't Die by Accident

King Arthur Won't Die by Accident

Anime & Comics · Trash_Prospector

CallmeGo
CallmeGo
1 years ago
Commented

Doesn't seem quite practical compared to genjutsu since you still have to overpower the opponent's chakra network to bloodbend them. Maybe you could try to make something like Hidan to make the concept work

End of the chapter. How do you like it? Tell me your thoughts about the blood bending should I do it or not… 

Naruto : Hinata Hyuga

Naruto : Hinata Hyuga

Anime & Comics · Devils_hand

CallmeGo
CallmeGo
2 years ago
Replied to Duke_Sahib

So far it's alot better now the only problems left are the weird spaces within paragraphs and periods aside from that it's readable

CallmeGo
CallmeGo
2 years ago
Posted

my only real problem with this story is that please use any grammar application. My eyes hurt after reading the first chapter.