The series have a lot cliches.
ch 108 I'm dead...?
Fantasy · Pendulum_
Why do girls let random people touch them, writer? and how pathetic mc
ch 94 Ties don't bind?
Fantasy · Pendulum_
Why doesn't Mc use his eyesight skill to find out where the girls are?
ch 69 [Bonus chapter]Winter Wonderland
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Mother of all and you wrote him? Shoul'nt be her? Cuz Mother a woman
ch 56 The Best Laid Plans...
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
I was just saying in the previous episode that he's finally going to become Chad lol. But still he is naive
ch 55 Stupid Cards
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
To be honest I know I've been complaining about the series from the beginning. Your series score is now 6.5/10 in my eyes. Because of a lot of cliché drama scenes and mc being unnecessarily kind and stupid. Otherwise the story is pretty good. My three wifes is very similar to the this series. It is very similar in the way it is writing skill, if i didin't see author name of this series i definetly thought victor wrote it. He(mc in this series) just needs to kill those who try to hit on him around the women he loves. Like Yandere. If you make chad the mc (which I hope after this episode he will be) and don't let the cliché ex-boyfriend or old man masters into the guild because the mc should be the only man around woman guild. So if the story is more monsters and dungeons and slice of life etc, the story will be 8/10 directly in my eyes. Which I rarely give this score. So improving the characters, improving the story (eliminating Chinese drama clichés) will benefit you a lot. Right now my three wives is 7/10 in my eyes because the last episodes are not as good as before. Anyway, I hope I made myself clear.
ch 53 Letting Go of Guilt Pt. 2
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
The fact that mc is a simp and a netorare lover. some people have compared mc to mc in my three wifes but it's nothing like that. The mc in my three wifes was a yandere. He wouldn't let any man near the women he loved and he would kill anyone who had feelings for his wives. Look at this mc. He brought the man he made a deal with to someone he loved. What will the author do next? Will the old man set up his own harem among the girls in the guild? And mc's lame apology to his ex-girlfriend... yeah, he's a real simp and an idiot. Victor is nothing compared to this MC.
ch 51 Rowan Is a Bad Liar
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Not melanie
ch 40 Flames of Heaven
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
What do you mean Polyamorous? You have harem too? 🤣
ch 38 Dinner Party Pt. 2
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
What a stupid side character. The man also watched the video. Even though she did everything he told the woman, he finds the blame on the woman. I wonder how he became the guild master with this intelligence? and author why are you trying to create drama for the main character. The guild master has no reason to kill the main character. He was not embarrassed either. Why does he look like the young master from the Chinese series?
ch 36 Dinner Plans & Failure
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Why are you trying to include ex in the story? I hope he doesn't reconcile with his ex.
ch 35 First Gate Cleared!
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Why? Didn't you say in the previous episodes that harem has become normal, even in the modern world?
ch 35 First Gate Cleared!
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
They both have trust issues. They will heal each other
ch 30 Plot
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
This is just novel relax man
ch 23 Contract
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Both i think? If there any girl let touching another lirien then both
ch 94 Ties don't bind?
Akashic Records of the Bastard Child Engaged to a Goddess
Fantasy · Pendulum_