MrOobling

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MrOobling
2 years ago
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if Ning, who spent thousands of years floating through empty space, isn't the most patient person, who is?

Ning was annoyed by now. Even the most patient of men would be annoyed, and Ning was far from being one.

Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

Reincarnated as an Energy with a System

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MrOobling
MrOobling
3 years ago
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Overall definitely among the better novels I have read on this app. The characters are quite Western in that they follow Western ethics and values. There's no mass-murder or creepy perversion, neither is there a silly emphasis on "face" and respecting elders. In fact, the author mocks this value several times throughout the book. I've noticed a few mistakes in the writing, mostly simple typos. The writing style is ordinary- better than your average translation but worse than your typical western fantasy novel (and it has the usual over-abundance of dialogue). The energy system is fun, especially early on when the process of gathering energy leads to unique situations. However, later all the energy is gathered via qi in cultivation, making the energy system very generic. I look forward to how this returns if the series goes interplanetary (as has been foreshadowed and really hyped up). My main critique is with pacing. Some are way too vast and fast paced, while some others go a little slowly. This somewhat links to the world building, where decisions made about the world has led to the character hitting a ceiling and progress stalling for the foreseeable future (until he can leave the planet). This is especially annoying cause at the start, the author talked about how the planet was massive, many times larger than Earth. However, the MC was very quickly given a map of the entire world and, by hitting the peak so early, much of the lustre and unknown of the planet was lost quickly. I'm really looking forward to how there being multiple system users plays out in the future- I hope the MC has a real challenge.

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