There are a few types of errors. The most common ones are those that most people's brains just tend to skip over, and then there are those that cause you to stop and reread it a few times. I assume most of the errors you have had are the first kind, and they don't really matter unless you are trying to publish a professional book. This one is the former though, which is why my brain caught it. Good work on the story so far, I am loving it and looking forward to seeing what you do with it in the future.
It turned out that Mr Wilson was what they'd call a "Texas Oil Man." Used to, that meant someone who drilled oil in Texas, but these days it meant someone who worked for a company that harvested the Biotechnica-licensed CHOOH2-producing wheat anywhere in the world and happened to be Texan.
Skitterdoc 2077
Video Games · SpiraSpira
I would probably replace the "used to" with "in the past." though I have to say it is impressive that we are already 42 chapters in and I am only now noticing the first mistake.
It turned out that Mr Wilson was what they'd call a "Texas Oil Man." Used to, that meant someone who drilled oil in Texas, but these days it meant someone who worked for a company that harvested the Biotechnica-licensed CHOOH2-producing wheat anywhere in the world and happened to be Texan.
Skitterdoc 2077
Video Games · SpiraSpira
I agree with you, I am saying that I believe that both Garp and Akainu follow what they want to do. You can see Garp doing this by how he always ignores orders and eats his rice cakes, while akainu's belief in absolute justice pushes him and he will do absolutely anything to achieve his goal. Although the war seemed to counteract that belief with Garp, I believe that should Ace have asked Garp for help, he would have thrown everything away to save him. The argument about Garp or Sengoku being a conqueror who works under others was to try to say my OC working under a non-conqueror was not that far-fetched. This whole conversation seems to have gone in circles and gotten confusing, so I apologise for that.
Carter thought for a moment, before replying, "My dream does not require me to be a captain, as long as she doesn't try to steal my freedom away and start ordering me around, I don't mind following someone weaker. After all, your old crews First Mate was a conqueror as well, just because he served under someone else doesn't make him weak or hold him back."
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
I am a bit confused at this comment. I said that the thing I said about Garp earlier applies to Sengoku. He still joined the marines and served under many non-conquerors before he reached fleet admiral. It is also my belief that there is no way that both Garp and Akainu don't have conquerors, it just hasn't been shown yet. If they do not In canon, then in this AU they do have it.
Carter thought for a moment, before replying, "My dream does not require me to be a captain, as long as she doesn't try to steal my freedom away and start ordering me around, I don't mind following someone weaker. After all, your old crews First Mate was a conqueror as well, just because he served under someone else doesn't make him weak or hold him back."
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
Poor use of diction, sorry about that. I meant to say malnutrition, but must have put anorexia by mistake.
Realizing that his current state of health, i.e., anorexia is not conducive to training, Carter decided to eat a few more apples right now, as it is the only food source on hand. 'I don't know if these apples have the same caloric intake as apples from earth, but a regular apple should be about 80 calories, with not an ounce of protein. I am going to need another source of food, and soon' he thought.
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
Same thing applies to sengoku, then.
Carter thought for a moment, before replying, "My dream does not require me to be a captain, as long as she doesn't try to steal my freedom away and start ordering me around, I don't mind following someone weaker. After all, your old crews First Mate was a conqueror as well, just because he served under someone else doesn't make him weak or hold him back."
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
Any thing like that won't be for a while, that is a side storyline, while the main one is focused on action/adventure.
I believe that there is a higher chance for the devil fruit to reincarnate in a close by fruit, but it could also reincarnate halfway around the world. The world government likely don't want to risk the chance of devil fruits reincarnating and falling into other pirates hands, so they don't use such a method.
As he walked away from the two dead bodies, pulling out his Den-Den Mushi to call the marines to come and receive the bodies of all the pirates, he noticed a glint of silver to his side, in a bowl of fruit. Getting closer he saw a silver fruit covered in lightning shaped spikes, wrapped entirely in a bright yellow stem that comes out of the top of it in a lightning bolt style T shape.
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik
There are multiple female characters within the story, that could be considered main characters. Though there is only one love interest.
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original Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
It is only once a man reaches rock bottom that he can forge a will strong enough to climb to the peak. Carter was one such man. After wasting his chance at life, he died with many regrets, but that was not the end for him. Join him as he strives to become the strongest and reach the peak of One Piece. OC/Bonney. Cover Art by Ikki Lopez15 Chs 535 Collections
Honestly? I have pretty much dropped this story. I had no plans going into it, and was just making stuff up as I went along. Now I have had writer's block for over 6 months, and have been unable to come up with any plotlines for the New World Arcs. If this story does update once more, it will likely just be a chapter detailing their training over the two years, and then it will go back on hiatus.
Weightless - A One Piece FanFic
Anime & Comics · Dysleksik