Can't disagree with that logic 👍
Thank you for the honest feedback! Seriously, I'm genuinely grateful (⌐■◡■) It's this kind of honesty that has helped me grow as an author. That was evident from how I wrote "The Achievement Junkie" years back. The further the story went, the better my writing got, all thanks to reader feedback. But while that greatly helped the mid to late stages of AJ, it couldn't change what I had written already as the story's foundational chapters and initial arcs. If I were to somehow start writing AJ today, after now having published over 3,000,000 words via multiple novels, I guarantee that certain aspects and/or parts of the story would be handled VERY differently. That includes my presentation and development of AJ's MC, which took me almost 250 chapters of AJ to start getting right, IMO. Way longer than necessary. That's why I can't personally disagree with you or your feedback. For similar reasons, I decided to launch the new sequel, "Outclassing the Achievement Junkie" with an all-new MC and setting. To honor the original story while also trying to elevate the story's overall concept to the greatest heights possible. Again, THANK YOU for giving my story a chance and for sharing your honest thoughts, regardless of whether you keep reading or check out my other novels. I wouldn't be the author I am today without help from readers like you. Please, accept this digital high-five ヘ( ^o^)ノ\(^_^ ) P.S. I'm no perfect author, nor do I believe a perfect author exists (though Oda appears to come pretty damn close at times). That's why I value your feedback and am still trying to create better and better stories. To constantly grow as an author, even if only by 1% each day.
HA! hahahaha! That's a good one... 😂
The Sun Dragon kept control of his breathing to calm down. A few small, multicolored crystals appeared in Halmut's hand as the dragon clenched them tightly. With each deep breath, a portion of multicolored energy seeped into his arm, allowing Halmut to relax more and more with each breath.
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A fair point of consideration 😉
Yes, as a very minor sub-plot
Yes, the MCs are different, as are the worlds/settings. However, the shared ties are gradually revealed more and more as the story progresses. That's a planned fact since long before I ever published the first chapter 😉 So new and old readers alike can enjoy the ride without any issues 👌
I appreciate that! As you can tell, One Piece is a major inspiration for OoO, particularly the feeling of epic adventure and found family (Though we might go even darker at times since the MC is an remorseless assassin instead of a shonen rubber boy lol)
love the profile pic btw. Much respect
The Achievement Junkie
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