How did you manage to make the pokemon world into some type of generic cultivation novel. 'Talent' come on really.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 : The World of Pokemon
Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
Why doesnt he just spend points on a big nuke of a skill instead of all these meh skills. Firebolt weak machine gun, multi firebolt weak machine gun still, fire atro turret weak machine gun... Guy has infinite mana, just get a small nuke and spam it.
ch 40 Chapter 40 - Returning to the Surface.
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Cool background, revenge, restored body. Cool. Stupid system... what a shame. Ruined the story, getting 'characters' makes the world feel hollow, having a bunch of stuff given to him is pointless. Guy struggled to become OP yet now you've mary sued him its making him boring.
ch 0 4 Chapter 4
Anime & Comics · Anfractuous
10 chapters in and the numbers already slipping. 15 minutes for what? Shaved 20% of the hp instantly.
ch 10 Unexpected Turn
Games · XiaoKongxu
I'll give context, the way its written it bad english. The tenses are all over the place and it doesnt flow well.
ch 0 7 Amulet of Chaos
Games · XiaoKongxu
Literal children flirting? Bro.
ch 10 Banter Brushstrokes: A Playful Palette of Teasing and Flirting
Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
Kingdom building is boring to read. May as well go read a wiki page.
Skipped that entire arc.
ch 23 Departure #23
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
Wow, what a waste of time. Can tell this is a translated novel. The amount of useless words in here is staggering.
ch 95 Throwing Dire Claw Knife!
Games · Grand_Void_Daoist
Its unreadable. One of the worst written fics ive seen. Reads like a crack fic despite it not trying to be. Guy has not discovered apostrophise so thinks using colons for talking is appropriate. Honestly why even put this trash up.
This book has been deleted.
Interesting in the beginning, but the authors quality just declines, so many plot holes, MC personality is all over the place. The side characters and old 'strong' characters are honestly stupid. He gets betrayed by the academy? He's literally the strongest student in hundreds of years, completes the tower, is shown to be amazingly strong and yet they just throw him away and try to kill him? WHAT? They literally want strong students to help the dark faction and yet when they have one they don't prioritie him at all? Like he'd be the first thing you try and secure when the actions attacked, but he's just forgotten about and even is attacked by that same faction. Im so confused about that entire situation. What a stupid and badly written arc, i've never seen a story fall down in quality so much so fast.
Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
Fantasy · xlntz