Claudious

Y’all would smash a hundred year old elves from lord of the rings but suddenly Melisandre is too much🤦‍♂️Ok then😂😂

Please come back bro....I miss this book

Can’t just kill people then ask for forgiveness coz the prince wasn’t heard. If I was Elijah I’d kill all the involved at a later date when I was more powerful😤😤 Thx for the chapter...it pains me to say this but a much better chap.

Sage* not safe. And I meant break in and out of his house for anyone confused.

None of this makes sense..the pointless reveal the mercenary revealing who he was and why he was sent. The classic villain dialogue about how the hero had been duped. The plot armour present to protect Elijah and his unwillingness to negotiate. It doesn’t matter if he attacked a safe if he has the power to break in and out. The most logical option would be to negotiate when the merc had offered to come to an agreement. Somehow no guards also followed him only to turn up again when he’a critically injuries. Also didn’t he have a personal bodyguard. So many plot holes and just a bad chap in general. Thx for the chapter😤 after all, my mom did always tell me to say thank you even if you don’t like the food or service

It’s not shelterlessness it’s homelessness and furthermore you said he swung his sword randomly in a pattern in the air or something along those lines...you can’t swing your sword randomly but also in a pattern that’s a contradiction....just a few corrections Thx for the chapter

Serra is literally acting like an anime girl and kinda takes away from the realism otherwise not to bad! P.S not just Serra Blaise too with the whole yes senior to Damien...no English person acts like that and no English girl acts like Serra most definitely.

I like yours better coz system novels nowadays just feel like cheats and so it’s hard to show how hard work or talent got them there when they have a literal cheating system to assist them

Thx for the chapter