Aromaticx

Even in the story itself the MC has the intelligence of a golden retriever.

Eh a whole chapter telling us about something the MC was involved in after the fact instead of integrating it into the story as it's meant to have happened. Don't do this Author.

ecstasied? did you mean ecstatic?

My 2c. The short sentences are very jarring to read. You should take related points and work them together into one sentence, breaking them up with comma's instead of periods. Shifting the dialog to it's own lines and not having it in the middle of paragraphs would help with readability too.

Money being the decider on a patient receiving critical care blows my mind. Is China really like this?

"exceeds human understanding"

Er so this whole if it doesn't cause damage it's not an attack thing is a bit silly. I mean you could just go around killing people by detaining them and tying them up (dehydration) or suffocating them with the environment. I.E. putting a bag over someone's head doesn't cause any damage, tie them up, bag over head, watch as they die is perfectly allowed? Even if you can't die in the safe zones doing these sort of things in the right way would make it a fate worse than death. Water boarding doesn't usually cause harm... Also couldn't you just tie someone up and take them out of the safe zone?