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• Entertaining and charming.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
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• The detailed description helps to connect more with the story and the characters.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
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• An appropriate length.
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas
What do you mean never confirmed, it is very much confirmed in the 4th book when Harry and Hermion visit Hogwart's kitchen and see a drunk Winky (Crouch Sr. ex house elf) and Dobby explained that she drunk too much butterbear.
(Before starting: I am not sure where Three Brooms sticks let 12 years in. So if that is not the case then just consider a plot whole or simply a special mean Orion used to get inside, known as 'Mind Tinkering')
Book&Literature · kamidemond
Weren't they breed in the year of the triwizard tournament? I remember that event Skeeter slandered Hagrid in a daily prophet for illegal breeding of new species.
I grinned, quickening my pace through the snow. "Please tell me it's not another Blast-Ended Skrewt. I can still smell singed hair from last time."
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
Quiet nice so far, I like it. Waiting for more.
I find the story wery nice and well written.
I like it very much. It's well written and have great character development.
1 piece of white equipment gives him around 5 points and costs 1k, a green equipment gives him 50 points on average and costs 20k, what's wrong there? to get the same amount of points(50) he need to only buy 10k worth of white equipment in comparison to 20k of green equipment.
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Eastern · Three five mysterious seven
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• I think they are appropriate for this point in the story.
Reincarnated in Hunter x Hunter
Anime & Comics · David_Arenas