Lets go!
Are you palmer the melffy player?
Tyfc!
Tyfc!
Repeated paragraph (I do this all the time while writing too XD)
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Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy
Tyfc! I think its nice that every chapter has substance. Personally I feel like chapter length is good. I do think it’ll be ok, regardless of how you end up doing it though :D
Tyfc! Always a blessed day when a new chapter comes out :D
A little later Dartz draws a card from the beast he sent, so either he originally sends beast, meaning his monsters gain 500 atk, or he sends hedgehog, and gets that effect(is it s/t search? I forget) instead of beast
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Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy
Mistake here, should be shaddol hedgehog, not beast (the bottom speech)
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Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy
Potential mistake: short short (probably meant to be short sword)
Tower of God: Sequence Strength
Others · Yesnth