sorry but Lelouch from Code Geass is not a Villain. He was only the enemy from his Dad and last of the world with the secret plot to make the world a better place and he has sacrificed himself for this. So he is not a VILLAIN!!!
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Warhammer System in Marvel
Movies · BillNyeThePGGuy
what a great chapter
nice story but i think you have nerfed the Fidelius really big. The Fidelius is a cheat spell from gigantic propotion and you have broken the spell easy with a Bombarda. Voldy would have used the bombarda or a Fienfire to destroy Potters home easy, when the Fidelius would be only a bigger and glorifyd invisible spell. Why not use the Ravenclaw library and a Ritual or so to destroy the Fidelius, it would not be ilogical to write that Rowena is the creator of the Fidelius and know how to break it.
i think with a lightning strike so long you can easy burn MAGMABOY^^ burn baby burn
Releasing a breath, Amon uncovered himself while the strong strike was still raining down at him. It was fascinating how a bolt of single lightning can strike for more than 20 seconds.
One Piece: Reborn as a Skypiean
Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
NANI???!!!, it is DxD! then kill Issei and rescue Draig^^
MUHAHAHA i am imune to cliffhangers^^
*Insert diabolical Evil Djinn laughter here*
Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
Book&Literature · GnomeBob
Jepp this is my VIEWPOINT and i take no offens^^
yes the 1 season and was influenzed a little from other ff with Hestia^^
i like your story very much but i have really a BIG problem with Hestia. She is one from only three virgins under the gods and is 5 MILLION YEARS old. She would never fall so fast for Bell. She is not a seductress or a slut! For Hestia to fall in love with Bell you must take your time, from my viewpoint this is the only chance. How long is he in the familia? Not really long and he have not much interaction with Hestia. She is mostly clinging but innocent
+1
2) Continue the story without doing the Pov.
Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape(HP, Star Wars)(In process of being rewrite!)
Movies · Shadow7Blue