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21 days ago
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"You speak as if you are the only one who has been insulted. My wife says you called me a cuckold. Since we have both been slandered here, is it not wise to seek some form of compromise?"

Re: Blood and Iron

Re: Blood and Iron

War · Zentmeister

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22 days ago
Replied to Matan_Pepperstone

JFK was in the 60s

If people still aren't over something that happened in the 80s then do you think they'll readily fall under Arias now? After such little time has passed??

Blessed by Night

Blessed by Night

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

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24 days ago
Replied to tsunamimaster

you are waiting in the station and someone push you into the tracks, come on it's not difficult to think about this scenario

And there was no mercy being granted to them. Not only were the men being shot in the streets, having their throats slit in their sleep, and having the grand misfortune of being run over by trains. But the women and children were not spared the violence either.

Re: Blood and Iron

Re: Blood and Iron

War · Zentmeister

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26 days ago
Replied to Remnis

iIthink this was AI translated and uploaded if before the upload they gave the text to a human to foolproof we are less likely to see some atrocities in these translations

The samurai hastened to the lakeside, scooped up water from the shore, and drank greedily of the taste of home. Small boats plied the waters, and villagers going back and forth warmly greeted the samurai, inquiring about the bounty of their capture. Young girls, rowing closer in their boats and clad only in waistcloths, boldly displayed their youthful figures and sang love songs admiring the warriors.

Aztec Civilization: Destiny to Conquer America!

Aztec Civilization: Destiny to Conquer America!

History · Swinging the sword to cut through the clouds and dreams

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26 days ago
Replied to zuesgod1738

the webnovel company is translating this to English, it's not a single person

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1 months ago
Replied to Chance_Wolfe

Bram stoker's wrote Dracula using Bran's castle as setting, and because of this it was transformed into a tourist spot and not because it's better suited

Eventually, the family arrived at a historic monument, a castle from a distant era, one that had quite the legacy. For you see, the legendary Bran Castle had been the home of the Tepes Dynasty, meaning it was the residence of the infamous Vlad the Impaler, who had been the inspiration for Dracula.

Re: Blood and Iron

Re: Blood and Iron

War · Zentmeister

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1 months ago
Commented

Hello again PWS, sorry for bothering you once more and only commenting in this type of occasion. On the second part of the chapter the last two paragraphs are repeated with slightly difference again.

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1 months ago
Commented

hello author, in the middle part of the chapter half of the paragraphs are repeated with slightly difference between them, the final part is alright.

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3 months ago
Commented

hey @draejon I'm happy that you returned to write the history but please review what are you writing, these chapters you written after you returned are written in circles, 2 to 3 paragraphs say the same things with different words and little adds in each of them, this is completely unnecessary and your readers aren't kindergarteners

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3 months ago
Commented

@sahejRocks the 4 and 7 paragraphs are the same and Amaeron is written as Aemerion.