MosseSmith

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2018-07-04 Joined Mexico
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MosseSmith
MosseSmith
1 years ago
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One ok rock in the house 😂👌

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
1 years ago
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One question, are you a force of will tcg player?

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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And here the waifu of the main character appears. If it's any member of Everglow, I'd prefer Siyeon. But I understand that if they talk about China, they would have chosen Kyulkyung ex-member of Pristin

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter. You are going for the good way. God bless you with many children😂😂😂

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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I am too hungry for more chapters and novels of this genre. It is appreciated that the novel is still standing

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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I look forward to a romance with Sana. She is so cute and adorable

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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Is it just me, or I get the feeling that Rachel Jung is SNSD's Jessica Jung. Asian, born in America, known as the ice queen. Author, confirm my suspicions

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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Is it just me, or I get the feeling that Rachel Jung is SNSD's Jessica Jung. Asian, born in America, known as the ice queen. Author, confirm my suspicions

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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How are you writer? I am not the qualified person to do it, but I would like to give my opinion about the book so that it can be improved, but don't take it the wrong way. 1st So far I like the story and it keeps me entertained, but I think the chapters could be longer. It is not necessary to divide them into so many chapters talking about the same situation which is not finished. 2nd Regarding the problem of writer's block, it happens to all of us who dedicate ourselves to writing, it happens to us all the time and to avoid it, it is best that before writing you make a map or a table in which you roughly capture the general story that you want to count, a beginning and an end. In the middle you can add events, stages or arcs as you want to call them, which will still have defined what you want to happen. They may change over time and that's fine, but always keep in mind the ending you want to achieve. All this will help you to give more consistency to the story, that there are no inconsistencies and that it can flow better. At first it's easy to write for writing's sake, without knowing where your story is going to end up, but over time you're going to run into blocks. I tell you because it happened to me and it took me a while without writing. It's stressful. 3rd Enjoy your story, always accept constructive comments, discard the others, they will not help you at all. Do not be discouraged and leave your story thrown away. Do not do what many others have done, that the stories of this genre leave them unfinished. Good luck and success in this project. we will continue to support you

MosseSmith
MosseSmith
2 years ago
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What a turn of events. I wonder when we went from cute to bloody. I'm lovin 'it