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Robertp3001
Too many "!" when a period would work. Sound like they were yelling at each other calmly. I'm not sure if the chapter was any good. The exclamation marks threw me off.
Robertp3001
Please learn to use the word " you". It hurts my eyes to read it a single letter.
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Commander-In-Chief is literally a rank, the top most rank of the military.
"Since the United States is providing the most troops, machines, money, and President Hector King Washington is already the accepted commander of the Allied Forces. I propose an emergency act today. According to this act, President Washington will be granted a Military rank, one that suits the Commander-In-Chief.
Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
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