Andpaj

There are number of people who read it. Inam providing my opinion and what people like me would like to read... you have your own way of reading it - fine. I am not going to criticize it (as you criticize me / and suggest that I have to change). I believe the question is for the author - why is he writing it? To make money? Speed of generating chapters and slow action progress will lead to deacrising portion of readers. Of course (looking at comments) there are people who like it - the main question what he wants to achieve? How many new readers each week? How many (paid) chapters read each day etc. So the question is - what would be the best for author - keep writing in the way he has been writing till now, or make some changes to get better results (as novel has potential - as many - but requires something to become the hotest one). If he is writing for himself - then will not care about posts and will write in the way he wants :)

I believe there is a need to work on the speed of the novel... 1/3 of the chapter is about how each person looks like... is that helping in progressing with the storyline? Nope... if it is adding value? Personally for me - not... if there would be 4 chapter per day and 1 (in total) would be focused on it - than fine. But if there is just 1 chapter per day or less... it is a bit frustrating to read :( I like the concept of the novel, but in that speed second orderal will be introduced in 5 chapters and it will be finish in 40...

Maybe it toom more time to write it but from READER perspective, it was repetition... summary of differences could be done in couple of senteces, not through half of the chapter (which from main character perspective took just a couple if seconds to review it). I have seen at other books, an approach to generate more content through adding too much details / repetitions and it didn't end well... Hopefully it wouldn't be the case with that novel :)