lkJSEDcnK

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lkJSEDcnK
3 years ago
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And so after he sighed, he said after his breath in a low voice that none would hear him. what did he say?

lkJSEDcnK
lkJSEDcnK
3 years ago
Commented

can you change the [young female] to something along the line a young female voice said. i like your writing style and i hope you keep it up, but i think leave just name of one speaking should change. anyway thanks for the chapter, and this just a suggestion.

lkJSEDcnK
lkJSEDcnK
3 years ago
Commented

The key is to hurt the enemy more than he can (hurt) me and the best method of doing this is trough ensuring, when I hit him, the weapon will be efficient