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Is Galacta (daughter of Galactus) a thing in this story?
I was going to read this story after reading a review that it’s no harem and no devil peerage, since I thought the author would develop the world and have better character development/interactions. But I guess that’s not going to happen. Massive power creeps ruin gamer fic. Honestly I think creat instance dungeon should not be a skill, since it ruins most stories.
Well I am going to start reading it, if it’s no harem and no devil peerage. DxD has an amazing world to work with, but usually it gets over shadowed by harem’s, or focuses too much on the devils (like in canon). I have no problem with a harem story, but usually it trains the story. The author would not have time to flesh out the characters in the harem, and the characters that are not part of the harem almost never get character development. As for why I am not a big fan of devil peerage fanfic, is that people almost always shy away from the darker side of devils. They are not human, and should not be treated with human standards. To them power is everything, and those in power make it hard for others to reach their level. And peerages are just a collection of slaves. There would have been much better systems to implement the evil piece system if they just wanted to increase the population. And it would have been done in a way that best supports the devil society. Allow high class devils to own a peerage is another privilege for them, yet people don’t treat it with the gravity it is due. If I was a human with a sacred gear or another skill a devil would want and they offered me to turn me into a devil, and I wanted to, I would write a lengthy contract, detailing what I my duties as, what my restrictions are, and what are the things that I am not willing to do. Then I would ask for the price of my service. Since I will be agreeing to be a slave. Of course the price would not be needed if the devil gives me more concessions in the contract. Sadly most fanfic treat a devil’s peerage as a *** slave harem.
I just started reading, and I recommend changing it from a master’s degree to a bachelor degree. It would make more sense. Or you can remove the jumping grades part. But that’s just a recommendation.
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TDG: I Have a Primordial Beast As a Pet?!
Anime & Comics · Sin_O_Sloth
From what I understand this person, didn’t realise this was a cultivation story. And they hate them. Granted TODAG is a dead give away, thought proper acronym is TDG, but if you aren’t into cultivation novels you wouldn’t know. To be fair I know where they are coming from, apart from maybe 2 or 3 decent cultivation stories I have read, the rest are shit. It’s a repeating loop and the culture is just unrealistic. The way sects/clans behave in a world where a random wander can kill them all is super stupid.
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TDG: I Have a Primordial Beast As a Pet?!
Anime & Comics · Sin_O_Sloth
I like MC fanfic, and I love skyrim crossovers. But I have a policy to not read any story on webnovel that spams words to reach the 15k words needed to get into the ranking. With an average chapter length of 1k-2k words it would take 8-15 chapters to reach that limit.
Your answer is not clear. Though I hope it is not a harem story, as those tend to have shallow character development.
Too long? Is there such a thing?
This story is stolen, the original author is NotAHero and he mainly posts on another site. He has said that this was not posted by him so it’s stolen. Please don’t read it here and look for the other post, also leave a review saying the same once you confirm what I am saying is true.
Legacy:A Grindelwald's Tale
Book&Literature · Christian_Uzumaki