Thanks for the review, if for some reason I have to put this on story hold I will definitely let everyone know. But I will finish it you can be sure of that.
Okay, I glanced at the title and saw "The Snow Ninja Taylor Swift Defeat."
Chapter 107: The Snow Ninja Trio's Swift Defeat
Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
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That was his first mistake…
Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
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He is like Dumbledore, thinks a simple apology will cover everything and make it all right.
It was he who owed an apology to Minato and Naruto.
Konoha's Medical Ninja: One Punch to beat up Madara
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Hmm, not necessarily, I had my first thumb drive in 2002. Also if you google "When did Thumb drives become popular?" the answer is early 2000s, so I found no reason to change it.
"That's ok Mr. Banner, my biology is strong so I shouldn't struggle too much. If I do, I will be sure and let you know." It may have been my imagination, but this teacher came off as very condescending and stuck up. Good thing I held back on asking him if his first name was Bruce, I probably wouldn't like him when he is angry. The class proceeded normally, but I could tell that it was going to be a waste of time for me and Bella. We were both in the accelerated class in Phoenix school system and what we are learning in this class is about two years old to me. Good thing I kept all my past assignments on a thumb drive so I could just reuse them. Poor Bella being the old lady type, she hand-wrote all hers and I know she didn't bring them with her.
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Thanks for your thoughts. There is more POV changes coming, but they are for significant events.
Emmett thought to himself, I guess that's a bit strong for a human. Wonder what he would say if he saw Rosalie lift that with one hand and no effort. I should just pawn him off to Jasper. "I am spending all the time I can with Rose right now Thomas, some family stuff going on has her on edge. I could talk to Jasper and see if he is free. He is stronger than he looks, even beating me in some wrestling matches."
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Yeah, not looking to burn myself out on the story. Releases will be Mon Wed and Fri. I do agree that its a little overly slow paced though. I will try and pick that up at some point, too easy for me to get lost in the details though.
Thought I fixed that already. Thanks.
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If I can make it smooth then it will happen, if it feels forced to me then it wont. Not super far ahead in chapters yet so lots could still change.
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A.U. of the Twilight series. Thomas Raizel is the broken, adopted brother/cousin of Bella Swan who joins her on her trip to Forks. Edythe Cullen is the twin sister of Edward Cullen and used to having everything she wants with but a few words. Leah Clearwater is the first ever female shifter of her Tribe, or is she? Can Forks contain all that is coming to it?19 Chs 604 Collections
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This book will be LOOSELY based on Amalgam Comics. An old combination of DC and Marvel with a few more things added for my enjoyment. A 36 year old Garfield Logan is a military veteran working a Museum security job. A robbery goes wrong and our story begins. He finds himself in a different body and wouldn’t you know it he doesn't just have to worry about a big purple nut chinned simp that wants to kill 50% of all living things to impress his crush, Death (Balance my A&&). But he also has to worry about an Anti Lifer whose look really can kill. Seriously Darkseid, take up a hobby, learn to paint with more than the blood of the innocent. Set up an adoption agency for abused space animals and retired Paradeamon’s. Something, just leave Earth alone. This is my first time writing and I am doing it for my enjoyment. Will look forward to comments and constructive criticism but complaints will have a better chance of getting to me of you scream them out your window and I happen to be walking by at that time. My greatest hope is that this story will inspire someone else to write a story I will enjoy. Going to shoot for daily release but I have to work to do the things I enjoy so we will see. I don’t own the Pic’s or the Original Characters concepts. Also I accidently placed this in Novel instead of FanFic so moved it. Sorry for any inconvenience.132 Chs 7.7k Collections
Good catch, I'll fix it.
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