KaenOkami

KaenOkami

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Just a regular lurker/binge-reader.

2018-03-14 Joined Canada
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KaenOkami
4 years ago
Commented

Just a heads up, the word you're looking for here is site, not sight. Same for the next paragraph. Other than that, thanks for the chapter, and keep up the good work! Loving the story so far!

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KaenOkami
4 years ago
Posted

Love the story! I'm absolutely hooked right now. Managed to binge-read all 700 chapters so far, of the novel in the course of a week. That being said, there are minor flaws every once in a while, in the form of spelling errors, but nothing that would affect the user's ability to read the novel. 10/10 would recommend to others! Thank you for the great read, and keep up the great work! Looking forward to another thousands of chapters! ♥️

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KaenOkami
4 years ago
Posted

Overall, the story has a lot of potential. I like the concept of the story, as well as the character development that has taken place so far. However, where it falls short, and very much so, is the severe lack of punctuation & grammar. As such, I strongly recommend the author finds an editor to help sort out the problem with punctuation & grammar. Until then, I will be dropping this novel, as it makes it somewhat annoying to read.

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