This whole novel could have been solved with two minor wishes. Wish One: Turn Issei into the hottest women ever. Wish Two: Have female Issei fall in love with the main character. Let the situation play out. The main character would have been the only male on the whole planet. Good job author.
Yeah, I agree with a lot of your points. Just from my point of view: I read a lot of the fanfics on this site and some of the most popular fanfics seem to be written by one handed eleven-year-olds with three fingers. I could copy their story and post it into an editing software and every word would have a red squiggly line under it. I think I put around twenty hours this month into what I produced, part of it is me being a slow amateur writer. Another part is editing it and everything else. Looking at the statistics compared to the time I took to write it doesn't make me feel like it was time well spent. If I had to choose between reading and writing I would choose to read, I write because I feel like I owe this community something back for all it has given me. At some point, you just have to take a failure for what it is, and start something new. Perhaps this storyline wasn't good enough, maybe I should have focused on a self insert pokemon novel, or a harry potter game of thrones crossover. I guess long story short so I can end this awful rant, I just don't like to fail or to continue to fail and this story just doesn't scream success to me.
I have only read a story or two that had a harem that didn't weigh down the story in needless dialogue and actions. The main character is most likely going to have one-night stands or move in and out of relationships.
Yeah but you misspelled it, it's tampon.
This book has been deleted.
Looks like I learned my one new thing for the day, now I can go to sleep.
Uh, the story has been completed.
You making me blush.
Bro. If I could change one way about how I write, I would learn how people on this site can do one-sentence paragraphs. It just isn't me, I will try to find better ways to split up my larger chapters, I think my paragraphs are too long as well. Just remember I am an ******* writer, so I am learning as I go.
I don't know if a person in a coma can dream. I would like to think so, but I don't think that would add much to the story.
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original Pokemon: The Tale of a Grunt
A kid from the slums would do anything to escape that hell hole. With no other choice, he joins Team Rocket and rises up the ranks. Taught from birth, that everything he wants or needs has to be taken by force. He uses those lessons to thrive in the underworld of Pokemon.1 Chs 5 Collections
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A History of Violence in DC
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In the dark gritty city of Gotham, he was reborn into the body of a dying infant. Forced into a world of heroes and villains, he witnessed the worst humanity had to offer. He wasn’t born a conqueror but this world will forge him into one. Tales of heroes, villains, cops, and robbers intertwine with the main character as they fight to survive the vileness Gotham City is known for. Takes place in Gotham City Dark, slow placed novel Gamer System in future chapters15 Chs 661 Collections
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The Dark World of Pokemon
This is what pokemon would be like in real life, none of that friendship power bullshit. This is a story about an orphan and his only shot at a life worth living. Every step in this journey will be over the corpses of friends, foes, and pokemon.4 Chs 13 Collections
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The Rise of Rhys Yamagata
It’s never easy being reincarnated. Everyone only thinks of the perks, second chance on life, a better possible future, and hotter girlfriends. But, no one ever tells you the downsides, being eight again sucks. Watch as Rhys Yamagatta gets a new chance, a once pathetic thirty-year-old line cook gets sent to a new world. Where he will get the chance to battle the best chefs that the world has to offer as long as he can survive through school first. Totuski Academy has only ever had one goal, to produce the best chefs the world has ever seen and Rhys will be the best or die trying.4 Chs 15 Collections
Hey, So I translated what you wrote to English so I might have missed something in the translation. I think there were a lot of things I didn't really consider when writing this novel. I don't think it's that I can't write a strong story, I think I chose the wrong story to write for this platform. Right now there are three storylines happening at the same time. Although they will intertwine at the end of the arc and have it carry over to the next one, I can't imagine how frustrating it must be to read it when the updates are so sporadic. I think as an author because I know where the story is going it distorts my ability to see the novel from the perspective of the reader. This was my first serious attempt to write a fanfiction and like most first tries there are problems that you can't forsee.
A History of Violence in DC
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