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Visorsum
6 days ago
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After a squeal in shock and a sharp exclamation of 'pervert!', she then proceeded to punch him in the face as hard as possible. It was an instant knockout. In a sense it was a seckill in a different sense...

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

Fantasy · KeepingSilent

Visorsum
Visorsum
8 days ago
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Should be written 5 more eggs. 1 was laid after evolution

Kain was in a private room at the school training ground using their equipment to analyze the increase in strength for the Vespirae Guards after the breakthrough. There were 13 guards now after the upgrade, and there were 6 more eggs to be hatched in the star space until Queen could reach the maximum of 18 for an orange-grade Vespirae Queen.[1]

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

Fantasy · KeepingSilent

Visorsum
Visorsum
8 days ago
Commented

What happens after evolution? Specifically one that changes the properties of the contracted species skills and needs

Star spaces are unique to each creature, even within the same species. They are fine-tuned to meet every aspect of the bound spiritual creatures needs, including personality needs. Therefore, even if a contractor binds another creature of the same species, they'd probably be less than thrilled at the prospect of a second-hand space not tailored to them. While a contract with a completely different species would be impossible.

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

Fantasy · KeepingSilent

Visorsum
Visorsum
9 days ago
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Author Rule #37: When your naming sense sucks, blame it on the characters.

Obviously, whoever named the schools in this world has the same naming sense as Kain's orphanage director.

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

Fantasy · KeepingSilent

Visorsum
Visorsum
9 days ago
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Yet the treasures that can be found within, surprising wonders such as lost ancient magic, legendary heroes' armor, swords that could slice through iron like mud, and even sealed vampire girls!

Who Designed This Underworld Dungeon?

Who Designed This Underworld Dungeon?

Urban · Moonlit Penglai Princess

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Visorsum
14 days ago
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"Teacher Li, why are we going to the Battle Club?" Lin Su blinked.

Beast Taming Patrol

Beast Taming Patrol

Fantasy · Book shortage forced to write a book

Visorsum
Visorsum
20 days ago
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Its only concern was whether the terrifying Standing Ape would regard it as emergency food.

I Attained Invincibility In The Real World

I Attained Invincibility In The Real World

Eastern · The Flying Iron Palm

Visorsum
Visorsum
1 months ago
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Idiot, pain is an extremely important measurement of the body's limits. Why not do something beneficial like sacrificing the body's impurities?

Suddenly, Han Zheng realized that the sense of pain wasn't very useful to him.

I Become a Martial Arts God in the Chaotic Demon World

I Become a Martial Arts God in the Chaotic Demon World

Eastern · Sealed July

Visorsum
Visorsum
1 months ago
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pained>>> painted or penned

Bit by bit, I recalled the founding idea, smaller bits of creative thought on how to solve various problems that were likely to arise… And bit by bit, the whole thought came back to me, materializing in my head not as just a loose desire to make something specific, but a solid idea accompanied by a general schematic pained by my thoughts directly in my brain. 

God Of Crafting

God Of Crafting

Urban · MotivatedSloth

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Visorsum
3 months ago
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Submarine ---> submerged

Fifty meters deep, they found a submarine cave entrance to the laboratory. After hours of navigating, they arrived at massive, broken doors littered with destroyed equipment and vials.

Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Fantasy · Redsunworld