Faveryy

Faveryy

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Slightly shitty author

2018-02-28 Joined United States
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Faveryy
1 years ago
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This started out fantastic. Really great premise and a fairly intriguing main character. But, it seems I hit the wall that many others have been hitting in that it's just a slog to read throughThere truly is a point where too much of a good thing just ruins the rest of it, and of course by this I mean the romance. I can appreciate a good slow burn, but when damn near every chapter, or at least what seems that way, is filled with cheesy smut and corny lines of love, the whole thing gets dull real quickI'll definitely be checking out more works! In terms of grammar and initial ideas, as well as communication with the reading audience, I was particularly impressed, however as of right now, this one ain't it

Faveryy
Faveryy
1 years ago
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I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcore Genuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come next This may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes

Faveryy
Faveryy
1 years ago
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It's been a while since I've dug out a star wars fanfic as good as this one is. I'm loving the crew's chemistry and the direction the story itself is taking. Quality is great overall. My only qualm is the update speed, but as someone who used to write regularly, I get the pain of trying to keep a regular schedule with this sort of stuff I'm enjoying this very much. Keep it up!

Faveryy
Faveryy
3 years ago
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I don't exactly get to say this very often, especially on the fanfiction side of this site. This piece is well written, well thought out, and most importantly, seems to be well taken care of This is definitely something to keep an eye out for, at the very least. If nothing else, the first 190 chapters hooked me in quite deeply, so perhaps it will do the same to you

  • Jumping the Multiverse original

    Jumping the Multiverse

    Anime & Comics TRANSMIGRATION

    “Yeah, I know. I’m always going too fast for your liking. It’s… a habit I’ve picked up over the years” His mirthless chuckle wasn’t at all reassuring “...Right. I should probably stop beating around the bush. You should, uh… you should prepare yourself, Ethan. What I have to say next, you probably won’t believe. Never have, with any of my stories” Prepare myself? What in the world could this man have to say that would be any stranger than in these past few hours? Nevertheless, I felt as though I should follow the man’s instructions… “Ethan… You are in a different dimension entirely” Ethan could only stare at the image of the man on the screen with a blank face Excuse me?! _________________________________ A story based around a popular community, most simply named Jumpchain, which very simply is a series of Jumps - of course - throughout a series of worlds where one collects powers and abilities to aid in survival If you want to know more, simply google it! - Cover Photo Artist -- Gregory Nunkovics -

    3 Chs 29 Collections

  • That One Time the Void Stared Back original

    That One Time the Void Stared Back

    Anime & Comics SYSTEM NARUTO

    Growing up in the Naruto World wasn't as bad as I thought that it was going to be

    6 Chs 92 Collections

  • In Resident Evil, but it's slightly different...? original

    In Resident Evil, but it's slightly different...?

    Video Games

    4.44

    A young man gets reborn into the Resident Evil games before the Racoon City Incident but gets a couple of benefits Well... More than a couple... **Cover is not mine, of course, :>**

    28 Chs 5.5k Collections

  • In Borderlands, but it's slightly different? original

    In Borderlands, but it's slightly different?

    Video Games OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION

    Damn, my creativity in thinking up titles is non existant... This idea just popped in my head as I was playing the pre sequel and after my third watch of the BL3 trailer Basically, guy gets thrown into the borderlands universe and kills some bandits? Might as well farm some guns and mine some eridium while he's a it.. ~~ This is probably going to be quite non sensical, meaning I'm not going to try and keep on the Canon road. We are going to derail multiple times, and it's more than likely going to be on purpose. if you don't like that, then I'm not forcing you to read ~~

    9 Chs 381 Collections

  • In Naruto but we are only slightly disabled original

    In Naruto but we are only slightly disabled

    Anime & Comics REINCARNATION NARUTO

    A man who has lived three whole lifetimes, born together with a girl on her second. Years of prior experience What happens when they now have knowledge of the immediate future? Hmm.. maybe a little bit of.. Chaos? ~~~~~ I initially posted this on Fanfiction.Net under the same pen name. I've decided to branch out and post this here as well. Hope ya'll enjoy~ ~~~~~ + If you're uncomfortable with excessive cursing, this is not for you. This story ends up becoming filled with them

    19 Chs 66 Collections

  • In Naruto with a slightly different ending (Dropped) original

    In Naruto with a slightly different ending (Dropped)

    Others

    A guy and his sister are chosen to get thrown into the Naruto world 'Nuff said [This is a Dual SI, meaning there are two Main Characters, so POV's will be switching every few chapters, just if that throws you off] (*Another note, I am still quite a novice writer, and as such, I will be making mistakes. If you find any, please point it out in the comments and I'll try my best to fix it unless I prefer it that way. If you still don't like it, nobody is forcing you to read is all I'm going to say*)

    9 Chs 44 Collections

  • In the Multiverse, but it's slightly different? (Hiatus) original

    In the Multiverse, but it's slightly different? (Hiatus)

    Others

    Like my other slightly different novels, this one follows the same theme, kind of I'm taking this from my first novel, 'Yet another Naruto Fic, but wait... there's more?' The last one kind of drove itself into a dead end with how much I put into it. The group got way too big, he got way too OP in such a short time, and the Romance was kind of forced I'm going to **try** my best to not let that happen this time ***Disclaimer*** This is a crack fic. Which means I'm going to throw whatever I want in here If you guys don't like it, feel free to tell me, but also tell me how to improve since I am still a beginning author *** Thank you ***

    5 Chs 109 Collections

  • THIS BOOK IS DEAD original

    THIS BOOK IS DEAD

    Others

    4.15

    THIS BOOK IS DEAD AND WILL NOT BE UPDATED ANY TIME IN THE FUTURE!!!!!! ~~~~~ this is a Fanfiction I'm writing for fun, if you're expecting a complex, over the top, plot twisting story, this is not for you. Again, this is for fun, there will not be any stable releases unless this becomes really popular for some reason or another, thank you~~~~~ Now then for the real synopsis, basically this dude dies, because I'm not original, and meets this god guy whoever the hell he is - gets transported into the Naruto universe and does some well uh... experimenting? Again this is purely for fun, may be dropped for some reason, or it may not. And for that reason I will be putting whatever the hell I want in here, as long as its paced correctly.. I hate stories paced like crap. So harem? sure, but only 2 per universe if I get that far, as long as I know the story then our boy'll go there. Might as well pick up a few girls around the cosmic blob that is space and time - the Naruto Universe pairings are already decided though. System? sure. systems are the only way to grow without being either really lucky or really evil.. or both Another disclaimer this will be a Gary Sue fic so if you dont like horribly OP MC's then this also is not for you If you read this far into here and still want to read then well.. Welcome aboard **********Also this will probably have a LOT of plot holes. and I mean a LOT. so like if I mess something up feel free to inform me. I may or may not fix it depending on how it looks. Thank you*******

    57 Chs 2.1k Collections