HaremBeGone

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From anime to manga to LN what a journey

2018-02-04 Joined Canada
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HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
1 years ago
Posted

Story overall is super basic with constant writing deveatioms leading to meaningless prose and incessant repeating of lines. Overall the author wants to try to fill up the word count with detail but fails most of the time. Martial Arts theme is cool and all but just not executed that well. Typos almost every paragraph. They range from improper grammar to entirely missing words. If the author were just to read over what he wrote it would easily be an entertaining read. The fact of the matter is the authors lack of editing just leads to the readers becoming unwilling editors themselves. I can confidently predict that if the Author focused any amount on cleaning up simple mistakes the novel could easily become more popular. Unfortunately as it stands the Novel is very close to MACHINE TRANSLATION quality and thus at most will be considered a filler book between people waiting for what they actually enjoy reading.

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
1 years ago
Commented

Uhhhhh what’s the last sentence?

He had initially sworn off covert operation missions because he wasn't particularly interested them, but since then he had come to realize that if he truly wanted to be able to adapt to any Martial Art, any foe and any threat, he needed to obtain some degree of proficiency in all fields. There would always be certain

The Martial Unity

The Martial Unity

Action · Lord_Streak

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
2 years ago
Posted

Hard to describe the amount of anticipation I feel waiting for each new chapter. This novel is one of the few that actually reads like a NOVEL. Not some Comic or Lightnovel or regurgitated Copy Webnovel that always plague the popular voting. I barely use this site when looking for a book at this point and keep it around merely to look over once I’ve exhausted the sites with actual quality. Unfortunately on this site it’s akin to having a treasure being buried under a pile of shit. That shit being bland copy books with boring plots. Forced romances or harems. And typically awful grammar. Author if you read this post I recommend putting this story on sites that truly care about reading a book, as Webnovel is just for mass produced garbage that scratches the itch of people who just want the same old boring tropes. Truly truly a good book. Seriously Author it’s extremely hard for quality books to prosper here. Just look at the charts. I beg that you consider applying your creativity where it will be appreciated

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
2 years ago
Commented

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"Then, what you saw in those movies or footage. What do you think about it?"

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

Fantasy · DreamThree

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
2 years ago
Commented

Not True but it’ a Chinese author so obviously they usually don’t know much.

Such couples weren't rare, but most of them belonged to rich circles.

Super Detective in the Fictional World

Super Detective in the Fictional World

Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
3 years ago
Commented

But he wasn’ t white in his past life either so……….

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Luke, on the other hand, hadn't been African American in his past life, nor was he one now.

Super Detective in the Fictional World

Super Detective in the Fictional World

Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
3 years ago
Commented

All I’m surrounded by is fear. And dead men.

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Hero of Darkness

Hero of Darkness

Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
3 years ago
Replied to Aurelius05

I assume Lord Of The Mysteries-also known as Lord of Mysteries

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
3 years ago
Commented

Author I am an extremely petty man. Please make sure they get punished.

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

HaremBeGone
HaremBeGone
3 years ago
Replied to Resurgent

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