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Thank you so much. I will surely improve my self and continue writing.
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Later chaps are better than earlier ones . First few needs a little more editing and details.Like that villain her character needs a little more strength and zila's brother and sis in law their character needs details. Anyway these are the first few chaps of the story. Can't judge too much here rather read till the end. Plot got me hooked though and I am curious what happens next. Book stays in my library.
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original LOST.
SHE WAS LOST . SINCE AGES. HE WAS LOST , AWAY FROM HIMSELF. THEY WERE LOST IN SEARCHING . ...... WILL SHE BE FOUND? WILL HE FIND HER, OR HIMSELF? WHAT HAPPENS AFTER? ........ Hope u like it . I am new . This is new. There some action drama romance and mystery coming your way,13 Chs 6 Collections
I like the plot and I want more. There were scenes that I could relate. And Xavier was right reading is an escape. and I want more of it.🙂 continue and keep it up.
OUTRUNNING TIME
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