moonset

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A pulse passing by.

2018-01-20 Joined Philippines
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moonset
7 months ago
Replied to moonset

I also think that if the MC was a normal kid instead of an adult in a kids body as a reader i would have thought we have an emotionally intelligent kid but is still immature and lost. That would have been so interesting to follow. But with MC being an adult the displayed dramatic and emotional introspection instead felt stupid.

moonset
moonset
7 months ago
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All of this would have made sense if the MC was not an adult transmigrated. These past chapters would actually be really good if we had a normal kid who is suffering. But with our knowledge as readers of the mc being an adult, the events that would have been emotionally impactful instead became a dissonant and frustrating ordeal to read.

moonset
moonset
1 years ago
Replied to BigReader500

sheesh were did this come from, are we reading the same thing? lol

moonset
moonset
1 years ago
Replied to JDice

Don't forget world building through the discussion of martial arts skills as the MC compares it to his past knowledge. I don't understand why you call this stuff fluff when there is so much substance to it.

moonset
moonset
3 years ago
Commented

oh please don't go the harem route author.

  • How To Be A God original

    How To Be A God

    Fantasy

    With the world of pressure dawns at you in every breath you take, a desperate escape is a modest path at your own sanity. But what if a worse eventuality are brewed when you let your own feelings stir. The negative thoughts loom. With all these confusions and hesitations bears a painful cry, where a slight gesture paints a butterfly. To spread it dryly, it's the cause and effect; the fear that ripples and slows you down. With all these damping thoughts i abstained from being sober and laughed behind the bottles. A leisure set where you can take a plenty of deep breaths was all i wished. Yet i was clawed and numbed by reality; crushed, again and again. So I crawled to vomit, and sprawled on the cold pavement to search for escape, completely devoid of any courage. Till' one night i found my self on the back of a horse, as it carried me to a paradise that took my breath away. There i woke up in a warm bed, dazed and greeted by a warm smile. It's there when a bowl of soup healed the soul of a lost drunkard. With all the noises that have haunted me in my life, for a very long time, at last peace paid me in silence. This is the page that holds the sweetest secret. The page of the brightest time of my life that flared so blindly and was lost in ashes. A time when petals are red atop the blue waves.

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