SearingDust

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2017-12-30 Joined Global
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SearingDust
1 days ago
Posted

I've never written a review before, but as a fellow reader of Naruto fanfics (I have read them all), this is worth the read. I'm currently on chapter 100-110, and the only criticism I have is that sometimes it's hard to follow the story, specifically who the pov character is, hence the 4/5 for writing quality. I can't speak on update stability, since I binged all 100+ chapters, but I felt that the novel on the whole deserved the high rating. Story development; this author is smart and skipped a lot of the unnecessary bits. This isn't a 1000+ chapters Chinese novel. Time skips aren't annoying, and what is there is worth the read. World background; the novel is unique in how it separates itself from other boring fanfics, in a good way. This alone is why I'm highly recommending this. I want to avoid spoilers so just trust me on this.

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SearingDust
12 days ago
Commented

Tyftc! I'm surprised you powered through for so long. I definitely took it for granted, but you deserve a break. Take a hiatus, week break, whatever you need to do. I'd rather not get updates for a month, than for you to burnout and never get another update.

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SearingDust
17 days ago
Commented

Tyftc! Hope you feel better soon!

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SearingDust
21 days ago
Commented

Tyftc! I really appreciate how you make the MC smart, rather than just have him power through with his system.

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